1st time rapping. Need feedback

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  1. LincolnLogs
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    yo fam. i've kinda just started doing music as in something other than producing and I figure why not post it and get feedback



     
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    That first track is something else. :wow:

    Also love your avy. :laff:
     
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  3. LincolnLogs
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    aye thanks fam :emoji_100: and i swear i had to save that pic when i saw it lol
     
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    bump
     
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  6. ThatAwkwardGuy
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    I dont even know what to say....It's definitely different.... I did like the distortion in the first song.
     
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  7. LincolnLogs
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    thanks
     
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    weren't you nicer at SL?
     
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    Vocals should be louder. As far as I can tell your decent but the vocals are so low I can't tell what your saying. Needs better mixing. I like the distorted sound but there's a way to do that without making your vocals so low you can't hear them. Production is fantastic. If vocals were louder I would bump this with the crew. Same goes for the second song. Good production, needs better mixing. Good start though man keep it up. I'm looking forward to hearing what you do next. If you post more songs, tag me.
    Edit: Loving the ending of the second song btw.
     
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  11. LincolnLogs
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    lol ok?
     
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    thanks fam. and yeah i'm still trying to figure out everything so my mixing will better
     
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    I've changed
     
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    started crying when i saw this :hovcry:
     
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    i got flames
     
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    me too
     
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  17. Cyreides
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    aight

    i have to agree with @Bman about the vocals needing to be louder. i could barely make out when you were on most of the time and couldn't make out what you were saying. need a better mix going with this, also, not a fan of the production myself, like, at all... something vry off about it to me. Idk what

    wish i had more to say but this kind of thing is really hard for me to critique, especially since i have nothing to say about lyrics themselves
     
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    Appreciate the input fam. Thanks for the listen and yeah my mixing will get better with time i'm still planning on mixing both songs again
     
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