A.A. (alien alienated)

Started by Narsh, Mar 10, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Mar 10, 2015

    I'm an alien alienated
    Failing at basic cadence
    My rhythm is syncopated

    born to a pair parents who thought I was heir apparent

    Mom and pop debating only hostile conversations
    Lost in toxins takin Pills like I'm a f---in patient

    But I wasn't patient painted portraits past my age
    And was waitin till I graduated

    Now I'm hating my hiatus

    I miss my mamma makin
    Whippin in the kitchen while my dad did the dishes

    Dipping into savings so that you could save Christmas

    I just wanna be with you when you're graying
    Cause now I'm growing older don't wanna hold onto some connotations

    From a childhood I've often hated
    In the rear view like Travis bickle

    I didn't mean to come off as fickle, I'm lost inside this sedation
    Remembering my own elation
    Rare occasion when they weren't waging war or wasted
    I still miss my home of mazes
    @Jet @LasiK @asvdawg @Mikey1990 @Meero @Radeem @Sith Lord @Skippy @GMV @Bot @Young Sinatra @Creation @Cyreides @Bleed etc
     
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  2. CSW
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    Mar 11, 2015
    had to pause on fire to listen to this

    wasn't worth it

    edit: paused wbd for a second listen, slighly more worth it
     
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  3. Narsh
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    i liked on fire when i was 16 too
     
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  4. CSW
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    lol quiet kid when I was 16 i didn't have recovery I had encore
     
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  5. attila
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    Mar 11, 2015
    Got a good flow
     
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  6. Narsh
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    Mar 14, 2015
    overlooked :wow2:
     
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    Final

    Mar 14, 2015
    is this you narsh?
     
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  8. Narsh
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    yes :wow2:
     
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  9. Final
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    Final

    Mar 15, 2015
    respect
     
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Mar 24, 2015
    @Narsh dude you f---ing improved BIG TIME. I dig the flow. :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  11. Narsh
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    Mar 24, 2015
    don't listen to my freestyle on captain awesome's new podcast then :laff:

    i preciate it man, whats the last thing you remember hearing from me? loll
     
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Mar 24, 2015
    i dont remember the names, i think it was off ur ep or whatever ur last "mixtape/lp/ep" was
     
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