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Anyone Tryna Critique Me?

Started by Agee Flame, Jun 17, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Agee Flame
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    Agee Flame

    Jun 17, 2015
    Hey everyone, I'm pretty new to this site and expect to visit here more often. If any of you can, mind critiquing my s---? I'll do the same for you if you'd like.



    Just another s----tier rapper tryna improve himself. I've currently been recording everyday to do just that, hopefully it works haha. Btw you have any tips/suggestions to a newbie using this site?
     
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  2. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Jun 17, 2015
    @Narsh and @Jet you guys should peep this and help the OP out. :bmmpr:

    I liked it, your flow from 39 secs onwards was really good.

    Also welcome to the site!
     
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  3. bijanamir
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    bijanamir toronto till the death of me

    Jun 17, 2015
    Your mic quality is good, which is a fantastic start. Good to see you've invested in yourself a little. The beat is ok but I know you didn't produce it so that's ok. Lyrics are mostly nice, I like your flow.
    Some word choice is a little iffy but overall man this is a noice start. Keep going hard, I see potential. Also, maybe find better beats haha.
     
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  4. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Jun 17, 2015
    yeah you flow well, mixing is excellent also. personally not a fan of the production but, obviously that's just preference.

    mention me when you drop some more s---
     
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  5. Agee Flame
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    Agee Flame

    Jun 17, 2015
    d--- what a welcoming community! haha thanks for the feedback! So it seems you guys didn't like the beat, how about this verse that I did yesterday?



    Like I said I'm droppin s--- like crazy to improve myself, should I keep it all in this thread? Thanks for helping out guys!

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    @Jet @bijanamir and thanks for welcoming me @Ordinary Joel
     
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  6. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Jun 17, 2015
    no problem man, I mean if you were bad we'd tell you.

    love this s--- a lotttt bruh. you sound so comfortable with your flow. I rap too, and I used to rap with this guy named J-Yak and you sound just like him.

     
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