Production Can you please critique a beat I made?

Started by The Eclipse, Jul 4, 2016, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. The Eclipse
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    Jul 4, 2016


    Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Much love.
     
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  2. dkdnfbdjdkdddjdjfvcgfl
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    Jul 4, 2016
    uhhh
    • I like the sample, super chill.
    • idf with the claps & hi hats, they sound a bit stocky & are very loud, they kinda dont mesh in well with the beat/sound natural.
    • lastly beat could use a lil more progression (even tho there already is a little already i still feel it could use even more) whether it be change in tempo, added effects, change in melody, whatever. Just to give it a lil more dynamic (not dynamic range, just... variety?). Cause the beat, even tho its a nice beat, felt a bit long & repetitive.
    all in all its still good s---, could def use a lil improvement but still p good.
     
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  3. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Jul 4, 2016
    could probably use a different hi hat and clap and some more variation like King V said. Mix in them claps and hi hats better as well. Try throwing some rolls in there in some spots with the hats or something as well
     
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