[FINAL TRACK] 13. make sounds

Started by Narsh, Oct 14, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Charlie Work
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    keep tagging me. i havent had time to peep this but when i get a minute im def going to
     
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  3. Narsh
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    ok, this just got incredibly real *caustic voice*
     
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  4. Narsh
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    1. Best Friend Remix

    Why they always lookin @ me like I know what im doing
    I don't know what I'm doing
    They think that i got the blueprint
    Catch me steady sippin dreamin about the nuance
    Truant proven truancy ain't nothin they should shy on

    Ive been proven my own
    I've been losing to my silence
    High on compounds
    double down when I'm down

    I'm fine when I'm out
    They cryin out now

    Call me a villain man call me a don
    my money...long like a big honeycomb
    paper is sticky too, separate them
    better place bets
    been a great friend till you integrate them

    Them into prettier trends

    I'm seein the future I'm eying the bend
    the curve in the road right besides all the trenches I hibernate in
    I'm
    hibernating
    I'm penchant
    I'm patient
    my patience avenging my need to connect it all
    like in the matrix

    AM to PM im leanin on Tylenol

    Basic I chase it my greed is inside fall
    Feed me to Nazareth
    Why do I got the gall
    How do I dodge the call
    How do I honor em
    How do I dig it up
    Dig up my tolerance
    Feeling my phallus is
    Is reason I'm confident
    Appearing all solemnly
    Quietly countin on county to cherish me
    Country aware of me
    Call me their majesty

    Ay

    Knighting me casually
    Igniting my fallacies
    Turning my fantasies into reality
    Like its a charity

    Barely been breathing but asthma is clearing now

    I am a boss..I'm a boss
    I'm my best friend take no loss

    the top of the coke like the mountains
    I'm skiing down
    proud of most nothing
    but its changing now
    Countin on my honey
    my hope in an octagon
    battling karma
    bonds shattering soundly now
    The chatter is sometimes inside of my cranium

    Started from nothing no song I was dealt
    They Carded me growin
    Bought my mommy my medicine
    Throwin up holdin us
    Constantly cornered the
    Constantine roaming Earth
    Love is now borrowed
    They constantly questioning worth
    We are not hollow
    We are now hollow?

    Why is he drainin em
    Down in Plutonium
    Nuclear podium
    Show me ur Odium
    Closest to opium
    She's wantin to stare at them
    She's callin me arrogant
    Selfish aware of it
    Melting when air had hit
    Pensive but confident
    Always been competent

    Now I'm the optimal
    Feelin like Optimus
    Transforming this radio station
    Straight into a stadium

    I Don't know no one
    im the only one

    I'm my best friend im my best friend


    I'm the best friend that I ever did had
    Caught in a complex a complex no mag
    Azine I mean Im blowin a bag on a tag to get clean
    I lean I ween I'm zen that's no zeen
    The causality casually killing the meme
    My innocence diligent entity queen
    you n me now
    we were clean



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    f--- u @Skippy :pfffft:

    Let's go!!
     
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    :dance2:...u guys have 24 hours or 4ever hold ur peace...:dance2:
     
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    Favourite part of the song by far.
     
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  7. Narsh
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    good s--- mann...my favorite part there is how the "why do i got the gall" line comes in haha :allears:
     
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    Oh I remember this one, still impressed at how you experimented with all those voice inflections with a great end result. That s--- gotta be difficult as h--- it makes you appreciate guys like ODB, Young Thug, Danny Brown & Kendrick to name a few.
     
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    :worship::worship::worship:

    they're all inspirations for sure. but at this point what i do is nowhere nearly as nuanced or purposeful as them, obviously....its haphazard and hits when it does /shrug

    i do agree that best friend is a hit tho :) i love it personally haha one of the best things ive ever done from all angles

    (the 2nd song is gonna b a lot more "controversial" for sure...b/c i love it but i know a lot of people wont like the voice at times...but thats for tomorrow :ohno: )
     
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    Here we go :hard:
     
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    K18 El Duderino Welcome to the Dopamine Dome

    Oct 15, 2015
    Your lyrics are good and flow is alright but I just can't get into your voice. Like I would not drive around town bumping this. Just some food for thought for you though
     
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  12. Narsh
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    definitely understandable lol, im pretty sure even i wouldnt do that tbh :laff:
     
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    In!!

    Dope s--- bruh
     
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    :comeon:

    eh f--- it :daps:
     
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    :emcreepin:im in as f---, you knowwhatimsayin?
     
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    No but welcome, the first song was posted a few posts up
     
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    K18 El Duderino Welcome to the Dopamine Dome

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    Count me in though. I wanna see some more of your stuff
     
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  18. Narsh
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    will do!! i posted the first track (best friend) last night, so ill post the 2nd track later today :mynig2:
     
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    will post track 2 at like 6. thanks to those who responded so far! :tybg:
     
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    2. Wolf Remix (sheepskin)

    Probably the most overlooked on the tape...because of how my voice sounds in parts throughout I know. But one of my personal favorites to be honest...recording these verses was a great experience. hopefully the lyrics help some of you guys get more into it :emoji_thumbsup:
    why they wait
    All the wait

    I'm tryina just make it all happen
    Wearin all this sheepskin, lookin like a wolf dawg

    There's a full moon in the middle of the day
    And I know what they gon say
    And I know what they gon pay
    And I know that they gon h8
    They gon just keep up w/ hatin
    Not patient can't take it catch cases
    Smoke weed in the place of my phonics
    So easy to give in to tolerance
    But green ain't what's really demonic
    Not Hopsin but hold on a second
    I'm sayin the message is violent
    When this blue cheese keeps makin me vomit
    I'm lookin like onyx
    I'm vibrant I'm lookin like diamonds
    I'm vibin I'm lookin like license to lie
    And I'm lookin I'm catchin ur eye
    And I'm hopin I'm lookin to buy me some time
    On a loan for a fine
    Okay that's fine
    Don't need me a line
    I can see in ur mind, brain
    I can see it I'm fine, trained
    I can see but I'll save
    The surprise for our lives to incite, ay
    Talk to me tell me your nickname
    Let me b 1 of ur mistakes

    I'm tryina just make it all happen
    Wearin all this sheepskin, lookin like a wolf dawg

    You lookin like a cheapskate, dawg
    I get rebates, boss
    They endorse this, sauced
    With them bids, like I'm eBay
    Tossed all my s--- off of the freeway
    Moved across country in a leer jet
    All this on my mind it ain't appear yet
    Why do they keep doing this when I don't got a reflex
    I don't got me reflexes
    They think I'm a reject
    They think this boy weakened
    They think this boy a defect
    They think this boy need sex
    They think this boy baseless
    They think this boy faceless
    They dont think I got the patience
    They don't think I got the greatness
    Okey dokey door then
    Hocus pocus potions
    Alchemist been active
    Us is what is poppin
    U is what is slippin
    We are smokin potent
    Locusts, focus, motion
    Oh then oh then
    Alone is when im open
    Been a part of petty problems
    Partly cause I'm awesome
    Leggo my ego no waffle
    Worry bout loss thats colossal
    Especially from the folks that are bored of my mogul
    I'm selfish in total in reckless
    Let's just forget that this happened

    Wearing all this sheepskin lookin like a wolf dawgg
    I'm tryina just make it all happen
    Why they wait
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    (btw, i guess even 1 song a day is too fast for some of you loll smh :getlost:)

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