Oct 15, 2015

Are ask of these Thugger reference tracks?

 

Oct 15, 2015

haha very funny...but yeah da first 2 mostly lmao since best friend is a thug remix, and wolf is a future remix

but i mean only to an extent..

let me find out u signed on just to say that tho

 

Oct 15, 2015

Songs alright. Not a big fan of it mang.

 

Oct 15, 2015

For best friends the lyrics are on point, it really blended in well with the beat, i enjoyed this song overall.
P.s if you ever meet thug again will you show him this?

 

Oct 15, 2015

Hmm this one caught me by surprise. I think you'll eventually be able to craft these sort of songs with ease but in this case it didn't sound as natural as Best Friend did. Off the top of my head I think this might have been the first song I heard from you with a hook

 

Oct 16, 2015

hey you're allowed to not like it, no worries haha

thanks for listening as usual

probably not lmao but i wanted to see if i could get alex his engineer or some1 to check it out and give me feedback. hasnt happened doe

hahah hooks are definitely rare for me, but this tape has handful for sure. my last 2 projects, 2sides ep and [ropes] all focused on me making fuller songs (even if the verses are freeform a lot of the times)

out of space, count on hope (ropes), sippin, adieu (i do), etc all have hooks as you will see

and although i said this was a personal favorite, you described how i feel exactly. if i were to try to make a track like this with a producer/engineer more experienced then me it wouldve definitely came out a lot better (and probably wouldve been less haphazard with the singing and s---).

 

Oct 16, 2015

Check in you fools

 

Oct 16, 2015

ontothenextone

3. She Ain't Ever Been (birdie fly)

Originally the last track on my 2sides EP project, thought it would be a fitting follow up to the remix of the future track, Wolf ("this is too easy I'm fluent, I got the new future influence"). I remember MIC saying this was probably his favorite track of mine to date, even tho it kinda falters towards the end.

Spoiler: lyrics

This is too easy Im Fluent
I got the new future influence
Im off of a bean and Im rollin
A truant the truancy tapered

In history cause Im a cape for
Dignity now that I made it
Absolved cause Im all in my cadences
Erasing my past like etch a sketch

Fearing Im lacking due diligence
The nuance is new to the entity
Dementedly meant to be infinite
M&Ms got em thats benjamins

Been into it fore all the ignorance
Im sippin on spirits its syrupy
Simply wishing Im seventy
Severing ties to everything
Heavenly skies I levitate
Send him to zion no hesitation

Im eating her p---- like a luncheons lately
I tickle her feet cause she want it

Im twenty now still in the present

Im drown in lust and I love it

My presence is patient the presents awaited
I gave her a necklace she was elated
Im trained to be reckless so Im sedated
They switching my ways to a tempered temptation
Im meant to be famous my eccentricities dangerous
Like all the ways that I lie to my lady friends
lately Im high on some arrogance
but guess ill make do with it

higher than I’ve been since jubilee
used me abused me then threw me away
my hair is now growing thats no super saiyan
its changing some colors but thats due to the waiting
im sayin im patient but losing it lately
connection is acting so fidgety
i got adhd in my memory
808s keep bangin my baser needs

basically dictating the tantrums
scandalous cause im an amateur
but im rapping like im on a pedestal
petroleum mixed with my heroine
she’s never heard of the place we are going
im into her face like she mona lisa

she breaks into pieces she’s shattering
smoking some crumble she’s high again
I got the new future influence
she aint ever been to the mountains we flyin
this bridie now talkin bout honors
and how she was once lost in a college
Im lookin like look at the scenery
she’s puffin on me and Im feelin it!

Im into it cause IM a gentleman
But Im questioning ways we’ve taken here

To get it to here took seven years
been stressing since 13

The pen is now working its mighter than viking
Im popping some Vicodin thinkin im Eminem
Imminent entity entering danger
Im losing myself in 8 miles of paperwork
Im only looking to cruise beyond all of the cadences
Hiding behind a mask like Doom and them
im doomed by holding a spoon again
Ive got a family fancying me as a gentleman

i wish i could show them Im making it snow again

Sniffing on blow again
Temperature lowering
Going so comatose
Holding on pounds and Os
Trying to get all the zeros
She’s sweetened like cherries
She aint know that the anecdote
Was lost in the damages
Standard is stagnant its
Grindin for fabrics and fancy designs and drugs
Im telling you give it up cuz I gotta give it up
Just for the canopy relaxing so happily
Avoiding all tragedy
still growing up annually, only showing them apathy

I just need her right there in front of me
Whether she’s on her knees or honoring her own needs
Shut out the world again
Im on a whole bunch of things
Lost in my entity
mind has been melting
the sedatives aint been helping it
fell into the serpents pit
somewhere she’s never been

this birdie fly to somewhere she’s never been

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btw not only do you f---s keep changing ur names, you're makin me keep track and tag u just so u can not respond




hey, at least i know who the real 1s are


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Oct 16, 2015

IN bro, why dont we get a grouptag for this

 

Oct 16, 2015

U keep saying ur in but i cant tell if ur missing the point of this thread or just trolling me

>i post a track a day
>i mention you wonderful people
>you guys tell me what you think
>repeat

 

Oct 16, 2015

but a group tag would be better, and i am in bruh but i havent had a minute to listen n post since the card thread poppin

 

Oct 16, 2015

lolol i should check that thread again ive been ignoring it.

 

Oct 16, 2015

I heard that first track "Best Friend". You're flows on point but I feel you're forcing your voice to sound like that(squeaky-ish). If that isn't true, then decent job.

 

Oct 16, 2015

good looks man...how does this work tho btw? do i just say "i dont force it" and it suddenly becomes pretty good? and if i say i do force it, its bad?

im genuinely curious lol....i think in the end it just matters how the listens takes it in you know. so if it sounds forced to you then, no worries....as for how my recording process i really dont "force" anything i kinda usually do the opposite and just keep the first thing that comes to me lol

 

Oct 16, 2015

oh ok yeah it did kinda sound forced but I'll believe you. Lemme see what this 2nd track is all about.

 

Oct 16, 2015

its been the least favorite so far

report back

 

Oct 16, 2015

"WIDE AWAAKE(Or Wayyyyy, I don't know)" was ehhh, maybe if it was harmonized(I don't know the correct term for this) better it woulda been pretty nice. But the rest of it was pretty decent. Aiight one more to go.

 

Oct 16, 2015

yeahh i definitely couldve re did that to be less out of tune and s--- but i wanted to make it stand out haha...probably stood out too much

glad u didnt mind the rest though...i like the end of the first verse and the middle second verse a lot

"they dont think i got the patience"

 

Oct 16, 2015

Yo god d--- this 3rd song
Loved this one bro. Downloading this s--- right now.

 

Oct 16, 2015

I'll hear the rest later aiight. Was fun listening to you.