[FINAL TRACK] 13. make sounds

Started by Narsh, Oct 14, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Fire Squad
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    Fire Squad Boss Don Biggavel

    Oct 18, 2015
    Easily the most left-field approach I've heard from you, the way the verses & flow were structured honestly left me impressed. The execution was not the best but this goes back to my previous thoughts on Track #2 about how I can see you down the road knocking these kind of tracks outta the park in due time.
     
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  2. FreeAgent
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    FreeAgent Resurrected like Jesus

    Oct 18, 2015
    Recent track is probably my least favourite. it's a different approach but not a song I'd bump all the time.l
     
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  3. FlawlessT
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    Oct 18, 2015
    I got new headphones, will listen to it later today:feedme:
     
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  4. FlawlessT
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    Oct 18, 2015
    Also do you do production @Narsh?
     
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  5. Narsh
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    Oct 18, 2015
    Noo

    I even say "I don't have skills, I can't make me a beat" on Count on Hope haha
    Report back
    I feel that
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  6. FlawlessT
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    Oct 18, 2015
    Ok, not so good at it but will try to give good honest feed back. thanks for lyrics btw.
    1. Best friend - already heard it before and gave my opinion, love it, my favourite track, well structured and sonically sounds good, that intro>>thug would be proud :emoji_wink:
    2. That my least favourite song, heard it twice and not feeling it tbh, not saying its bad.
    3. Good track, loving that variety & energy.
    4. I see what you did there with that just might be influence, but talking about that hook - i think the beat or maybe you lack something, like some piecs of puzzles missing to make it more catchy.
     
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  7. Narsh
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    Oct 18, 2015
    Nah this is great feedback man I appreciate it :) I'm glad you dug best friend and birdie fly
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Oct 18, 2015
    5. Zero to Neo (chef curri remix)

    did this like a year ago, as you could've guessed. managed to mix it even better now so i wanted to throw it on this project. i personally love this track lol.

    man man girls girls love serotonin
    ...
    she said not out in puuuuubliiiiiiic...in my room on them rollies

    Ill turn a zero to a hero
    Ill turn hero to a zero
    Tell that thot b---- Im Neo
    And Im Taking shots by the line like a free throw

    ...All my b------s lethal
    And they got weapons too, amigo

    You dont wanna step in my cathedral
    You aint gotta mess me or all my people

    I see you comin through my peephole
    Ill give a star bucks cappuccino

    You go every where that I go
    And we freeze em all out, subzero

    Man I got so much to say
    Man Im smoking hella jays

    I used to record everyday
    With the headset I borrowed from Kenny

    ay

    This a mofuckin layup
    When I was young I couldn't do a layup
    But now Im way up way up
    Im high as f--- b---- wait up

    And I heard you s--- b---- say what
    You on some sus s---, shut up

    I ont f--- with nothing
    My own fam be hating

    But now I'm graduated
    Emancipated, on that E, and elevated

    Im in that elevator xan got me sedated
    She aint your pal man she do it for a payment
    Im on my knees but I aint really praying
    She be moaning

    Man that girl love seratonin

    she can't get enough of it
    she just s--- it slowly
    she be headed for the head call it foley

    She say not out in public in my room on them rollies
    she say she loving it I'm so foolish

    i abuse it, i misuse it, i see illusions
    im a traunt u can't school me I'm a nuisance

    i can't believe she took the notion
    Even she cut me open
    and saw that I was pretty broken
    drinking these elixir potions
    a little bit of different doses
    im illiterate with legal questions
    i plead the fifth no not commandants

    chill s---
    Im on that cash to pay my bills s---
    Im on a coop for my meal, s---
    We got that stash of the realest
    Real s---
    Imma bag her up real quick
    She smoke the sack and comes back if she feelin it
    On her back in the back of the 'lac prepping dabs and Im feeling it
    In fact Imma spaz let her wax get Brazilian
    wax, like what Im smoking, s---
    You hear my verse you quoting it
    @Jehovah @FreeAgent @Packman @Fire Squad @FlawlessT @yeezyfan11 @Nuredin B @Astro @Michael Myers @Charlie Strangelove @JG2 @Oliver Queen @red rum @El Duderino @DetroitSkills @ThyNeighbour @Marduk
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  9. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Oct 18, 2015
    ^was just flipping through this a bit ago and wanted to say that was my favorite track after Best Friend
     
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  10. Jehovah
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    Jehovah SB3

    Oct 18, 2015
    I actually liked how you take like little pauses when rapping along this, felt like you was synchronized with the beat if that s--- just makes any sense. I really liked the beginning phase of this song tho
     
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  11. Packman
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    Oct 18, 2015
    fell off around the 2:00 minute mark but I really enjoyed this
     
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  12. Narsh
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    Oct 18, 2015
    My n-----, heavy co sign
    :sweatt:
    Was just taking drakes lead since he killed this track, but also just trying to do as much w/ as little as possible
     
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  13. Narsh
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    Oct 18, 2015
    Hey that means u f----- w/ a majority of the song tho so I appreciate it!!
     
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  14. Nuredin B
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    Nuredin B "The Cool Cats" - Number 99

    Oct 18, 2015
    smooth s--- top3 imo flow on point
     
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  15. Narsh
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  16. K18 El Duderino
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    K18 El Duderino Welcome to the Dopamine Dome

    Oct 18, 2015

    I made a remix to 0-100 about a year ago as well. It's awesome to see all the variety people bring when approaching this beat.
    Here's mine though to check out!


    https://m.soundcloud.com/k18-above-my-class/zero-to-a-mil
     
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  17. Narsh
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    Oct 18, 2015
    will peep!
     
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  18. Narsh
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    Oct 18, 2015
    didnt think id f--- wit w/ how it started but it was dope!! you got flow for sure...you're voice is dope too even tho u sound young. if u work on having a better like slur it would make ur s--- more interesting than when u end a line and it just sounds like ur a kid u kno? (doesnt happen often tho, just a few times so i thought id point it out)
     
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  19. Narsh
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    Oct 18, 2015
    f----- from the meds like a lab rat!!
     
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  20. K18 El Duderino
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    K18 El Duderino Welcome to the Dopamine Dome

    Oct 18, 2015
    Haha yeah man! Preciate the feedback but I was 17 when I recorded it. Haven't released anything lately but my newer music I've been cooking up has a more of a darker tone to my voice so I don't sound so young lol! Time is the only thing I'm waiting for because I feel like having a perfect voice is the key to becoming a great artist.
    But I've been f---ing around with different voices and flows and what note. Just trying to find what suits me best
     
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