[FINAL TRACK] 13. make sounds

Started by Narsh, Oct 14, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Oct 18, 2015
    First half of that song is smooth. Enjoyed it a lot. The effects on your voice sort of took away from my enjoyment in the second half of the song.

    Good song nonetheless though. :wow:
     
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  2. Astro
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    Astro ASHAD SEND ME THIS!

    Oct 18, 2015
    "You on some sus s--- shut up"
    :emoji_fire::emoji_fire::emoji_fire::emoji_fire::emoji_fire::emoji_fire::emoji_fire::emoji_fire::emoji_fire::emoji_fire::emoji_fire:
     
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  3. Narsh
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    Oct 19, 2015
    :dkk:
    what effects exactly?
    :bigquint:
     
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  4. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Oct 19, 2015
    Not even sure but the echoes or whatever took away the impact of your voice imo.
     
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  5. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Oct 19, 2015
    narsh got sumn hot cookin but he gotta refine it
     
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  6. FreeAgent
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    FreeAgent Resurrected like Jesus

    Oct 19, 2015
    Love Zero to Neo. Bumped this like crazy :banderas:
     
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  7. Narsh
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    Oct 19, 2015
    i feel u
    :tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg::tybg:
    Tell that thot b---- Im Neoooooooo
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Oct 19, 2015
    oh yeah, b4 i forget

    6. bah

    bah is a word one of my friends grew up usin' for smokin' n s---, and we started usin' it here in boston too.
    he wanted me ot make a song w/ it so i did. i know this was a favorite for some of you, so im glad you f--- with it!
    fun fact: that voice like 3/4 through saying "thats actually a good place to stop" or some s--- is my rommate walkin' in and interrupting my session lmao
    i felt like keeping it.
    rolling hard like yaw
    snorting on that raw
    yeah yeah naw naw
    smoking on something so bah
    the moment im woken i bah
    i bah on my way to my car
    I’ve been barred out since before that
    im sorry ill promise ill call back im bah

    a genie is on me come wish on a star
    im shooting im zooming im going so far
    the truth is now broken behind all the bars
    im barring im barring im barring im bah
    im higher than standards thatre set by my moms
    im rioting after i get off parole
    im firing back at the system thats broken
    im might in fact just stick em with broken
    shards that i used to open my potent
    arms its alarming i used to be broken
    now i am armed with hope and a token of appreciation
    ill use it ill mold it im malcolm outspoken
    im x’ing opponents no ounce of the focus
    im drowsy im lousy but im best when im sloppy
    im upset when im sober the rest is all happy though
    counting on vegetables broccoli celery let us be simple ho
    counting my money like walter no anecdote
    curing this tumor told truman stay in the show
    we met at the indigo, off a whole ounce a o
    so there aint no stopping me now officer
    she’s lost in the stars like she’s dizzy i heard
    her whisper to me like come closer and i turned (away)

    rolling hard like yaw
    snorting on that raw
    yeah yeah naw naw
    smoking on something so bah
    the moment im woken i bah
    i bah on my way to my car
    I’ve been barred out since before that
    im sorry ill promise ill call back im bah

    i look into the future like 20/20 (its far)
    she poppin them xanies many many (and more)
    hop in and hop on my sticky icky (of course)
    Smoking my J but she sober (no way)
    I hold my composure for icky vicky (ew)
    im moaning her name like vicky vicky (vicky)
    i stretch out her name ed edd n eddy (i felt her)
    tripling everything cept enemies (let em be)
    sipping on seventies head is so heavenly (heavenly)
    mixed it with juice and gin and losing my mind again
    im akin anakin when i been tripping im panicking (panicking!)
    thats plenty plenty (i bought her a mink!)
    dont tempt me baby (i order it)
    dont test me test me
    i was playing
    i like a challenge
    let me ask you if you saw the palace
    i know the answer i run the gambit
    ask your girl she know my quotables
    as for you yeah you can overdose
    suicide prone to those lost in a moment so
    often im lost in those but for now i feel close to hope
    i also feel like im just so close to comatose
    holding on pounds and o
    caring bout commas those
    matter as much as you and i
    whats sadder is they think its do or die
    im so evolved all i get is so high
    and im doing alright and im getting now by best
    its best just to try to now test the tide
    treat me like pest but im immune to the pesticide
    meet out back in your apron girly and let me inside
    live our life like lullabies
    thats love and lust and im
    slurring to sleep till we up and we smoke
    i am your rope you are my throat
    laugh from my joke choke on my smoke
    barred from the place where we first made our mark
    cause its easy to get lost in darkness we’re parked
    right outside of the tunnel i hope we dont start
    entering down to where entities die
    nothing is sparked and its sucks out the light
    its sucks to surmise
    such a true lie hid in disguise
    there aint no light lets just stay on this side


    let this stay on this side
    lets just say our goodbyes
    i promise i will when im down from this high

    high
    i
    fly
    i
    fly

    awoke from my entity and turned to the energy, something thats palpable
    practicing ballyhoo barely deserving the accolades
    entered and the turned the entire empire to something that those who do hope can acquire
    it pays to desire
    passion and ire
    i am lost in the shadows

    chased down by my shadows like im prince of persia
    im worthy im hardly i am and im not b
    polar my mind a mirage of the former
    feelings it hid now it hides only candor

    rolling hard like yaw
    snorting on that raw
    yeah yeah naw naw
    smoking on something so bah
    the moment im woken i bah
    i bah on my way to my car
    I’ve been barred out since before that
    im sorry ill promise ill call back im bah

    i promise ill call you when im coming back
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  9. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Oct 19, 2015
    Niceeee

    This track has a cloud rap feel to it, really chill. Love it Chef!
     
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    JG2 Thugger Lover

    Oct 20, 2015
    fiyaaaaaaaaaaaa
     
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  11. Fire Squad
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    Fire Squad Boss Don Biggavel

    Oct 20, 2015
    Nice work on Zero To Neo, really catchy flow & the vocal effects gave the track it's own identity compared to other renditions I've heard over the 0-100 beat...

    Bah got that nice wavy feel that normally I can vibe to but on this occasion it just didn't click with me :dno:
     
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  12. Narsh
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    Oct 20, 2015
    yeah bah should probably have a (demo) tag next to it lol, its kind as rough as the neon rainbow s--- in parts, but i liked the overall aesthetic so i kept it
    the s--- i just pm'd is even better.

    so far the 2 rough tracks i have for CCV2 are better than a lot of s--- on here tbh. (although we're still getting to one of my personal favorites on here...adieu)
    :sweatt:

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  13. Narsh
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    Oct 20, 2015
    countin' my money like Walter, no anecdote

    2 all my breaking bad heads :kdotcry:
     
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  14. Narsh
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    Oct 20, 2015
    i love the first verse, this s--- right here :allears: :allears: :allears:

    a genie is on me come wish on a star
    im shooting im zooming im going so far
    the truth is now broken behind all the bars
    im barring im barring im barred im bah
    im higher than standards thatre set by my moms
    im rioting after i get off parole
    im firing back at the system thats broken
    im might in fact just stick em with broken
    shards that i used to open my potent

    arms its alarming i used to be broken
    now i am armed with hope and a token of appreciation
    ill use it ill mold it im malcolm outspoken
    im x’ing opponents no ounce of the focus
    im drowsy im lousy but im best when im sloppy
    im upset when im sober the rest is all happy though
    counting on vegetables broccoli celery let us be simple ho
    counting my money like walter no anecdote
    curing this tumor told truman stay in the show
     
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  15. Narsh
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    Oct 20, 2015
    I KNOW THE ANSWER, I RUN THE GAMBIT

    ASK YOUR GIRL SHE KNO MY QUOTABLES
    AS FOR YOU, YEAH YOU CAN OVERDOSE


    CHASED DOWN IN MY SHADOWS LIKE IM PRINCE OF PERSIA


    a lot of lines i love on this tbh
     
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  16. K18 El Duderino
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    K18 El Duderino Welcome to the Dopamine Dome

    Oct 20, 2015
    really like this one!!! good job @Narsh
     
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  17. Thy
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    Thy 000000

    Oct 20, 2015
    Love the laid back smooth whispery flow you got on this one. Definitely the 2nd best for me so far.
     
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  18. FreeAgent
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    FreeAgent Resurrected like Jesus

    Oct 20, 2015
    I appreciate all the bahring :whylie:

    Liked this one. Really like your more laid back songs
     
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  19. Narsh
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    Oct 20, 2015
    glad you liked it m8 :emoji_heart:
    damnn, preciate it... i was pretty barred out when recording it lol, hence the few slip ups and me ending the s--- by basically saying "im barrd i cant even read the notepad from here" and laughin :'(
    [​IMG]
     
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  20. Narsh
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    Oct 20, 2015
    runnin up all of my money n i got the hunnies they buzzin' like bees

    :allears:
     
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