Jun 16, 2015 I'm knocking on the door to no avail Our story was to be the perfect tale Now our paths remain a worthless trail It was all astors and roses All sunshine and rainbows The tides turned The castors nullified under our noses At first, the love was adjourned Then it culminated I guess this is what I've earned Mixed emotions From this world, I wish to be eliminated Wiped off, left, forgotten I can't look back, but I'm still so tempted Why was this relationship ever attempted? I wish to sever you in a sentence Wrote it to this beat: Notice the multis. Please let me know how this was.
Jun 16, 2015 n----- you need a better poetic take on it im knocking on the door with no answer our story missing the final chapter all that remain of our paths is a fading laughter