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My first ever rap - constructive criticism please.

Started by Fanzik, Apr 17, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Fanzik
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    Fanzik

    Apr 17, 2015
    This is the first thing I've ever recorded in my life, honestly. I understand it's not great, which is why I'm posting it on here to see how I can improve.
     
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  2. Nori
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    Nori ☺ Deadpool is my deformed bousin☺

    Apr 17, 2015
    Did you make the beat too?
     
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  3. Young Sinatra
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    Young Sinatra I've moved, my new account is "Pato". Follow me!

    Apr 18, 2015
    This beat is sooooooooo nice holy s---

    About the rapping, well I see it's just a little snippet but you need to mix this s--- better bro. What did you use to record this? Pretty low quality imo. Also, flow feels kinda forced

    I think it's absolutely not bad for a first try, just keep working man
     
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  4. Dew
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    Dew سيف الله

    Apr 18, 2015
    u don't have the voice. never rap again. sorry
     
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    attila

    Apr 18, 2015
    Need to work on your flow. Sounds like your reading a poem, more than trying to rap it.
     
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  6. Mike Tyson
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    Apr 18, 2015
    youre so mean :laff:
     
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  7. Narsh
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    Apr 18, 2015
    what dew wishes he couldve told me when i started :wow2:
     
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  8. Fanzik
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    Fanzik

    Apr 18, 2015
    Yeah, that's a problem I noticed too. Is there a way I can practise my flow? Does posture help with that? I had to record this sitting down on my bed because my mic is terrible.
     
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    Fanzik

    Apr 18, 2015
    Gonna save this comment.
     
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  10. Fanzik
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    Fanzik

    Apr 18, 2015
    U
    Audacity to record, blue-yeti snowball mic to record. Thanks.
     
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