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My song I dropped a couple days ago good message. Feed back is needed PLEASE!!

Started by isaiah0725, Nov 19, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. isaiah0725
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    isaiah0725

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  2. Jordan
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    Jordan ⛴⛵️✈️

    Nov 19, 2015
    :wow:
     
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    Cyreides gfy

    Nov 19, 2015
    Nice man
     
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  4. isaiah0725
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    isaiah0725

    Nov 19, 2015
    Appreciate it yo!!
     
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  6. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Nov 19, 2015
    @CreativeSXN check this out.

    This has a nice old-school feel to it. :wow:
     
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  7. Prosciutto
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    Prosciutto a tarda notte al centro commerciale

    Nov 19, 2015
    I read this as my son I dropped
     
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  8. rapmusik
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    rapmusik 4

    Nov 19, 2015
    holy s---! this is fantastic!!
     
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    Nov 19, 2015
    Lit tbh
     
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  10. Translucent
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    Translucent I just slapped Dre

    Nov 19, 2015
    Dooooooooooope.

    The Drums :sweatt:

    Minimalism.. love it
     
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  11. JG2
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    JG2 Thugger Lover

    Nov 19, 2015
    this is nice :)
     
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  12. Nay Nay
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    Nov 19, 2015
    Song is dope, visuals could use quite a bit of work though
     
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    MPURA https://soundcloud.com/mpuramusic

    Nov 20, 2015
    d--- dude, this is pretty dope
     
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  14. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Nov 24, 2015
    the rapping is definitely pretty good but I'mot sure how I feel about the beat

    I think it would've worked f t later for the first 8 bars and then had the actual beat drop/come in but the song feels too empty.

    you yourself like I said, did well though. I'll probably have to listen again to fully grasp what you were talking bout cause it seemed pretty deep but for replay value, in my opinion, I need a melody or something to fill the beat up
     
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  15. isaiah0725
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    isaiah0725

    Nov 26, 2015
    That's really good feedback my intentions was to have it simple so people would focus on the words. But your not the only one that has said that, I really respect your feedback I really do and will take it into consideration. Thanks a lot!!!
     
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