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Started by LincolnLogs, Aug 3, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. LincolnLogs
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    Aug 3, 2015
    So I posted on here a couple weeks ago with my first rapping attempts and i've been practicing more and i've made a new song so leave feedback and any advice on mixing you might have


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  4. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Aug 3, 2015
    That cover :laff:

    I don't mind it. Reminds me a bit of the Cudi-style, the slow/drawn out method of rapping.

    You did the beat as well yeah?
     
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  5. PVRO
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    Aug 3, 2015
    The instrumental drowns out the vocals so I suggest to take a little youtube video lesson on mixing the track and vocals to where it's pristine quality. Other than that, good stuff m8
     
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  6. LincolnLogs
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    thanks. yeah i did the beat as well
     
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    thanks man. and i'll look into it
     
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    Aug 3, 2015
    Only skimmed cause I'm about to get ready for bed, but I'm really iffy about the vocals. I want to hear that beat tho by itself sometime, production sounds like it could be promising. I'll give this a real listen tomorrow
     
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  9. Bman
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    Very dark. Enjoying it. Would bump with crew. Vocals need to be louder. But the mixing IS better this time. Just not perfect. I agree with the posts above, watch a tutorial on mixing. I liked the production. Reminds me of Cudi but it still sounds like you. Keep it up. Tag me next time you post something.
     
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  10. Eedee
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    I pretty much agree with everyone, the vocals get drowned out a bit by the beat. It's dark, and I like the idea behind the song. Plus that cover lmao.
     
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