SXN80 Rap Songs Contest [Rewarding Prize]

Started by Jordan, Sep 28, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. B Xplicit
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    Sep 29, 2015
    Quick question how do you want the tracks posted youtube or is soundcloud good too?
     
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  2. Jordan
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    Jordan ⛴⛵️✈️

    Sep 29, 2015
    Welcome bro :daps:
    A youtube link is better if you win and your song is posted on Facebook, but if your song if only on soundcloud, that's ok :emoji_sunglasses:
    Do you want to know anything else? :leocheers:
     
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  3. B Xplicit
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    Sep 29, 2015

    Yeah man i do. What do you think of this?

     
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  4. Jordan
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    Jordan ⛴⛵️✈️

    Sep 29, 2015
    Stromg track, I like what you've done. If you like I can give a short breakdown later when I have more time. Just let me know.

    Until then, I'mma give a few more listens :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  5. B Xplicit
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    Sep 29, 2015
    Sounds good to me man, Thanks for listening!
     
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  6. Jordan
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    Jordan ⛴⛵️✈️

    Sep 29, 2015
    You're welcome :daps:
    Have you checked out the other sections yet? :emoji_sunglasses:
     
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  7. Narsh
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    Sep 29, 2015
    It was dope, I liked your accent. Thought it would throw me off at first but it worked. The rapping about rapping type content gets boring but this showed u got some technical skill for sure
     
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  8. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Sep 29, 2015
    lmaoo, decent bruh

    autotune is definitely too skrong though, and the ad libs are almost louder than the main vocals. otherwise, cool song.
     
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  9. Soumyadeep Kanji
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    Sep 29, 2015

    whether this wins or not please tell me how is it..i love criticism
     
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  10. B Xplicit
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    Sep 29, 2015
    yeah I've been having a good look around haha
     
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  11. B Xplicit
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    Sep 29, 2015
    Thanks for the feedback brother glad you thought it was dope!
     
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  12. K18 El Duderino
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    K18 El Duderino Welcome to the Dopamine Dome

    Sep 29, 2015
    older song "Zero To A Mill"



    twitter: @K18Keaton
     
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  13. mow
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    mow long live flippa

    Sep 29, 2015
    I'd show the power of rally english but my mic is horrible :lol6:
     
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  14. M.I.C.
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    someone gimme a beat to use
     
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  15. Marduk
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    Marduk Ab-Ka Ilani Bel Tereti Ensifiri

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  16. Marduk
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    Marduk Ab-Ka Ilani Bel Tereti Ensifiri

    Sep 29, 2015
    Checkout #RhodyMajor on soundcloud for beats
     
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  17. Edward Murillo
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    https://forum.sectioneighty.com/3d-the-jungle.t43440/ that's where i submitted and this is my YouTube channel where song is i submitted
     
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  18. B Xplicit
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    Sep 29, 2015
    These are my links too
    facebook- https://www.facebook.com/B.Xplicit.187
    Youtube- https://www.youtube.com/user/TNRMAFIA
     
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  19. Edward Murillo
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    Sep 29, 2015
    hey man i like it it sounds dope we should collab?
     
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  20. Jordan
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    Jordan ⛴⛵️✈️

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    Here's the full breakdown of what I what I think about your track. I'mma divide it into two categories :daps:

    What I like:
    - the beat is awesome. It has that that old school feel which I really like. Did you produce the beat or who did it?
    - The sample is the chorus is on point, nice scratching
    - your flow is well developed. When I thought that it would be the perfect time to switch the flow, you did it.

    What you can improve:
    - the cover art. There's a thread where you can submit your track for a well done cover art and tell what you wish. The results in that thread are quite brilliant.
    - Become famous :fifffty: That's no offense, this is what I wish for you. Fo' real, if you release an album, I'll definitely download it and give it a few spins.
     
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