Steps (Featuring Eedee) + Debut Album comes out November 6th!

Started by Jaba24, Oct 15, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Jaba24
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Oct 15, 2015
    New single off my debut album "Hello" that comes out November 6th!


    Single Art (made by me) -
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    Lyrics to Jaba verse -
    Verse1 (0:19 - _:__)

    Seperation, Depression, denial, survival,
    withdrawal, spirituality, confession, regression
    steps
    check my lyrics and
    all of these words from the dictionary possess the same qualities of, steps
    or perhaps a single step
    words jingle, people mingle
    people age and wrinkles appear, its not complex
    people are born because of love
    mistakes are made with absence of safe sex
    pay attention
    little simple signals can lead us to a voice that will eventually make noise and tell us what, step
    we are on but like i said pay attention that means listen and see with your eyes because all things twinkle
    in every single one of us is a star
    the only question is how far will that star go
    will the star make it above the bar and be noticed as in be the center of focus
    or will the star hit the bar come crashing down and be nothing but a hopeless bogus
    the answer is not found in a poet as great or terrible as he may be
    only ones self can know the answer to a question because inside we all know our purpose aka motive
    we can try to run away from our problems in a locomotive but after all we will return because everyone has been quoted at least once

    verse 2 -- 3:14 -
    1, 2, 3, 4 ,5, 6, 10 and 10, equals 20 wait then what
    whats next what should i expect
    do i head west? but my body speaks east
    who will i meet and who will do the initial greeting?
    what am i stuttering for? people wanna hear music
    not some dumb heartbroken and lost kid jitter on a beat for a few min-utes
    but s---, i guess this is how it is
    the other day i met some nice kids
    maybe these will be some new friends, best friends who will eventually turn their backs on me
    just how most people did
    i almost died in a car crash
    now i gotta deal with them d--- dump truck jokes
    they say its all fun and games but i can tell that they fib
    but maybe I’m too hard on people
    maybe i should sacrifice my anger like the decibels and the sheep but still
    my heart stays cold and i aint ever gonna be un froze
    says the trapped mindstate inside the snow
    thats why ive been making these songs while I’m on the road
    finding my way, listening to no one,
    so I’m told
    i stop and realize life is like a flight of steps
    too bad people often fall down steps as soon as they get to the top
    i sit here like whats next?
    i sit here like whats next?
    whats next?
    whats next?
    whats next?
    whats next?
    f--- it..

    Album artwork for "Hello" (made by me) -
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

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  3. DetroitDGAF
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    DetroitDGAF Locked in Mariah’s Wine Cellar

    Oct 16, 2015
    where my dude @Eedee
     
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Oct 17, 2015
    @DetroitSkills what u think of it?
     
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    Eedee Who?

    Oct 18, 2015
    Sup fam
     
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Oct 18, 2015
    can you fix the text? nobody wants to read it like that
     
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  7. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Oct 18, 2015
    your album art is dope but the title should be separated a bit from your name

    also the "yo, f--- it" is wayyyyy too Eminem esque, whoever that was lol

    the engineering seems to be better on the second verse but if this is your debut album, I'd go back an fix that mixing on the first verse. guarantee nobody's gonna understand a word you're saying and that obviously isn't the goal.

    this production is nice tho :wow:

    second guy does a better job at rapping.

    who's on the third verse? what sound are you going for? it sounds like you're trying to sound exactly like MMLP2 Emin lmao whatever you do, you REALLY have to do something about your mixing m8
     
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  8. Jaba24
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    Jaba24 Merry Christmas!

    Oct 18, 2015
    Im first and last verse.

    Yeah I noticed the mixing needs fixed. Im gonna fix it for album version.
     
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    Cyreides gfy

    Oct 18, 2015
    this has potential
     
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