[FINAL TRACK] 13. make sounds

Started by Narsh, Oct 14, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. FlawlessT
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    Oct 20, 2015
    Just listened to zero to nero, that song is straight fire, easily top 3 so far for me

    I ont f--- with nothing
    My own fam be hating
    But now I'm graduated
    Emancipated, on that E, and elevated

    &
    that outro:emoji_fire::emoji_fire::emoji_fire:
     
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  2. FlawlessT
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  3. FlawlessT
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    Ok just listened to bah , that song + beat is sooo chill, heard it 3 times in a row, can compare it to numbers from thug, really like that style from you. :emoji_relieved:
     
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  4. Narsh
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    Oct 20, 2015
    :cp3:
    cant compare anything i do to thug b/c hes a legend but im glad you liked it friend :jr:
     
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  5. Narsh
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    7. SiPPiN'

    this track was on my 11th floor EP thingy last june sometime, and i felt like reworking it for this. mixing is still rough for sure, but i liked how it came out.
    it has a jesse pinkman sample b/c another song on that tape, which is on this project as well (11th floor), has a sample of jane.
    i kinda like how between this project, 2sides, and [ropes] i managed to include the little intricacies for all of them throughout this tape.
    the notes for these lyrics are dated 5/13/14 btw
    and flylo eat called robotussin btw
    Sippin on some robo tussin
    Lookin at this view

    My parents are sick
    I'm an arrogant b----
    Rappin like it ain't tearin away at my skin
    Aware of the sin but using hallucinogen
    Abusin juice and the gin
    To alter mood on a whim
    The fools product's sense like
    A wise martyr said:
    "All the worlds a stage"
    And We are players, marred men
    Pair of plexiglass is shattered
    Broken bones; bombarded banter
    Comatose till traumas over
    But for now we got our kama sutra
    Nah mean? I lean you over

    Sippin on some robo tussin
    Lookin at this view

    Move through a few unused Q's
    Light a doobie troop, eyes droopy snoopy too
    Who be owin who, who be healin holy wounds
    Wooly mammoth in his bones
    Et phonin home
    Off that notre dome
    Her optics launching nuclear codes
    Cooky, leer by the fold
    Bands bands drummin em home
    Grand slam, cup in the hold
    Couple of gold necklace bold
    Shiva ring singing songs
    Bring it home
    Bring it down
    Robo tussin
    Whisper loud
    Help me dipper stars
    Trip her to a different part of this facade
    Gone in outer space I'm far
    Flyin lotus's swift by me, my mouth ajar
    Lost in all our constant guard
    Suspend in the matriarch
    Ain't he hard
    Brainiac ain't know his marks
    Scolding scars, relearning arts
    Like Juilliard to earn his stars
    It's only dark, his eyes be shot
    Can't see himself for what he's not
    Just what he is that's not a god
    Wonders if he'll find it in mars
    But if it's truth then by and large
    Someone shoulda seen the arc
    Known the secrets from the start
    Comfort comes in jars
    Bells ringing sippin stars
    Limpin leanin, setting suns
    Letting lunar lawns become the norm
    4ams, radiohead, ridin the bend
    Who coulda knew
    Who woulda known
    The view the view
    Bringin it home
    :angel:
    :devil2:
    :wub:
    :blunt::blunt:
    :work2:
    :blunt::blunt:
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  6. FreeAgent
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    FreeAgent Resurrected like Jesus

    Oct 21, 2015
    So many @FlawlessT posts :allears:

    First comment. Could use a little more mixing, but the way it is now is good imo.

    Gonna have 'Sippin on some robo tussin
    Lookin at this view' in my head for the majority of the day
     
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  7. Thy
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    Thy 000000

    Oct 21, 2015
    Dope tbh yeah it coulda been better mixed but flow makes up for it. Bruh you got an awesome flow not gonna lie.
    Also...
    :hmem:
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Oct 21, 2015
    he loves me :wiggins:

    yeah the vocals for parts are from last year when i was using my friends headset lol (the one i referenced on zero to neo :snoopshades:) so mixing it was weird. just tried to make it as smooth as possible.

    :whistling:
    you aint seen nothin yet m8, the next few tracks (stay alive, out of space, 11th floor). flows for days like a period :bigquint:

    :dkk:
     
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  9. Narsh
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    out here quotin' shakespeare n s---
    :sweatt:
    The fools product's sense like a wise martyr said:
    "All the worlds a stage"
    And We are players, marred men
     
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  10. Narsh
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    oh yeah
    8. Stay Alive (just till tomorrow)

    the 2nd track off my 2sides ep. the rapping the tracks from this ep (out of space, birdie fly) is just relentless imo.
    definitely try to read along w/ the lyrics if possible!!!
    im ignorant
    we coulda been the best of friends
    these feelings, they complicate

    im rapping 2 u and know that you’ll double take

    I’m back in the booth i got nothing to do but to set it straight
    nothing to lose I’ve fought with the truth I’m a heavyweight
    heaven is everything
    halo is heavenly head is like 7Ds trip to euphoria
    four of you moving through my mind like dementia

    d--- it i mentioned the 4th im offendin em
    yeah there are more of you but let me reiterate

    the three are my family
    fourth is a causality of focus and apathy
    the door that was closed cause i choose to be fidgety
    couldn’t appreciate purest serenity
    needy and greedy like merchant of veince b
    surgeons are entering looking the tension is
    raising im wooden they take off pound again
    im shedding on pounds im moving some weight again

    you’re entering into the mind of a mated man
    made it when i lately planned to play the pen
    im a messiah i can’t chance it on ignorance
    the signs or large im a g--- of some stars a constellation thats glitching and

    man im innocent

    malignant flow, fake visions its
    sick like serpents
    glossy her lipstick
    saucy my wrists
    off of a bean its
    senzu its seems
    im bending the schemes
    see me bequeath
    her on her knees
    my seeds for needs
    she’s heard it seems
    always perceive honest as weak
    but to me, thats a nice quality
    this bridie is sweet, but she’s cold on her feet
    so she flew down down to the south
    on her knees open mouth
    bonafide beau
    regarded w/o even one civil war
    whip out my whip for her
    shades more than 50 whew
    base bumps like jumping off
    say somethin, f--- come on!

    stay alive, just till tomorrow x4

    i may reside in my guilt and sorrow
    but i aint mean for you to feel the hallows

    im deathly shallow my depth is hollow
    how come the throttles now stuck on auto
    im on a bunch of bought oxycotin
    this s----s too easy to go right and cop it
    and aint a cop gone scpect a script
    man this s--- is easier than smokin weed
    i barrow a zany im barring on dreams
    darker than donnie my playing with bunnies
    im huger than heff nirvana has entered
    im smelling on teens cause im still only twenty
    id laugh at the elderly but im betting im them
    by barely 30, cause im aging early
    caught up in chasing down shirley
    her body a temple im entering
    im snorting im sniffing on cut things
    coke is now entering entity, eased
    fired up higher than notes on a key
    on one end of piano and diving off deeper than t he opposite specturum
    f--- all the hecklers send you to heck like im swearing around little kids
    heeding the ignorance feeding my need just champion civilians
    educate idiots, separate all of em
    but im too lazy
    im too absorbed in the cadences
    and im a baby
    still stuck in the womb of mamma then
    an adult on the surface i look promising
    but im trapped in the belly like scalawags
    the underbelly aint for all the passerbys
    why am i alive tonight
    i been on cyanide since i was barely five
    vince off of entourage
    can’t tell if love is bought
    banter the obvious
    chat til oblivion
    but still i can’t still if im dealing with hidden c----
    feeling residual hatred for anything
    that im moves im consumed by doom that is capable
    cruise thru the paperwork
    no control man i like to swerve
    man did i tokyo
    driftin while shifting thru the radio
    imagined i heard myself on a stereo
    that wasn’t the one i been bumpin inside my home
    something is silent the passion impressionable
    patterns perplexing
    its a path that’ll fully fathom a festival
    or fashion a feasible phantom of reason its
    candor its banter its tandem achievements
    and further deterring from worth that is fleeting
    why am i not focused on healing
    my folks have been calling upheaving appalling
    appealing to knowleding i aint feeling the phonics
    im thinkin ill vomit if i drink some more tonic
    the gin is demonic the chin is just cashing some checks i know i can’t deposit
    im gone get myself socked for actin obnoxious
    but d--- it im off this and i used to visit you often
    and know you’re now talking but im takin my life to the coffin
    I haven’t really ever stopped coughing since i saw you last talking
    to some one so happily
    im smoking on apathy numbing numerically
    smoking like $80 some dollars whenever i light a tree
    its like its my christamas sippin some syrup yes
    feeling the spirits bless me with ignorance
    im figuring you just gotta

    stay alive just till tomorrow

    stay alive? she aint ever been

    this bird talk and this birdie fly
    stay alive...just till tomorrow :ohno:
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  11. JG2
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    Oct 21, 2015
    WHOOOOOOOOOOOOO
     
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  12. Narsh
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    more shakespeare:

    couldn’t appreciate purest serenity
    needy and greedy like merchant of veince b
    surgeons are entering looking the tension is
    raising im wooden they take off pound again
    im shedding on pounds im moving some weight again


    :lmaooo:
     
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  13. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Oct 21, 2015
    Sippin is niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiceeee

    SAJTT you f---ing snapped. :cp3:
     
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  14. FreeAgent
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    One of my fave tracks from the 2sides ep
     
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  15. Thy
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    Oct 22, 2015
    d--- bruh you sound hungry on this one! Them vocal layerings, those flow changes :sweatt:
    This might actually be better than track 3.
     
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  16. Fire Squad
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    Oct 22, 2015
    Love that you dived into that psychedelic sound for Sippin' that s--- is definitely top 3 on the tape so far. The rough mix actually helped if you ask me it made it feel trippy as h--- :blunt:

    Stay Alive = bars after bars after bars :sweatt:
     
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  17. Narsh
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    glad you liked both m8!
    :sweatt:
    damnn yeah it was the 2nd track on the project it was on, and even tho it was only 3 tracks, this one kinda got overlooked at first
    that was the intention haha, glad it worked on some level

    real rap :lmaooo:
     
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  18. Narsh
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    too much i wanna quote from stay alive lol...

    "im deathly shallow my depth is hollow
    how come the throttles now stuck on auto
    im on a bunch of bought oxycotin
    this s----s too easy to go right and cop it
    and aint a cop gone scpect a script
    man this s--- is easier than smokin weed
    i barrow a zany im barring on dreams"

    "id laugh at the elderly but im betting im them
    by barely 30, cause im aging early
    caught up in chasing down shirley
    her body a temple im entering
    im snorting im sniffing on cut things
    coke is now entering entity, eased
    fired up higher than notes on a key
    on one end of piano and diving off deeper than t he opposite specturum
    f--- all the hecklers send you to heck like im swearing around little kids"
     
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  19. ThatAwkwardGuy
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    Oct 22, 2015
    Listen to a few tracks sippin' was my favorite of the bunch, and the mix sounds good on my speakers at least lol
     
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  20. Narsh
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    Oct 22, 2015
    :wow2:

    thats all i can ask for m8, that someone enjoys on some level :rejoice:

    we only got like 5 tracks left, so catch up/keep up!! :wiggins:
     
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