Oct 15, 2015 so this is what @Narsh would sound like if he did a whole song in a calm voice the delivery is a bit monotone, try adding some emotion so t doesn't sound like you're just reading off a paper. some of the lyrics are pretty cool, punch line rap is always fun. do not like the chorus. it's not mixed very well either. third verse is also my least favorite. there's some potential here tho for sure.. you sound like a watered down lil dicky with your voice also lol
Oct 16, 2015 Haha I appreciate the feedback guys. Tryna make better music every day. I like your music @Narsh it feels like a compliment to be compared to you I mean I like your flow for sure your content's a little unfocused but its cool because I mean to each their own. I like making songs without a subject sometimes too lol My Zone is kinda like that.
Oct 16, 2015 I really appreciate that I could get an honest opinion out of yall. That's what I need to be the artist I wanna become. So like forreal haha thanks
