My newest release...Come Peep : !Mc'Lain! - Away

Started by ThatAwkwardGuy, Nov 29, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. ThatAwkwardGuy
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    Nov 29, 2015


    Give me your opinions! I hope you enjoy it...

    Wish my album art was better though lol
     
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  2. ThatAwkwardGuy
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    Dec 2, 2015
    looks like my thread has failed :kdotcry:
     
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  3. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Dec 2, 2015
    Not a fan of "here they go go go now they come come come" etc

    But your flow isn't too bad. :notbad:

    @CreativeSXN
     
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  4. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Dec 2, 2015
    delivery could use a little work, and not sure if it's the mixing or mic but the sound quality on your vocals, and the volume overall probably needs adjusted.

    also, not a fan of the part Joel mentioned above
     
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  5. ThatAwkwardGuy
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    Dec 7, 2015
    Thanks for the feedback! Learning as I go. I'm hoping to improve with every track, and continue to try new stuff. Mixing has really been a slow learn
     
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