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Started by ozy, Mar 12, 2016, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. ozy
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    ozy

    Mar 12, 2016

    @CreativeSXN
     
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  2. Narsh
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    Mar 12, 2016
    That ending is beautiful

    Only pArt I don't get is the Kendrick reference?
     
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  3. ozy
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    ozy

    Mar 12, 2016
    david bowie said his last album was inspired by kendrick. the line was more of a play on bowie tho and how drugs can help you live forever by making timeless music even tho they will most likely shorten your lifespan. kendrick's name was just kind of in there cuz he dropped untitled when i wrote this lol.
     
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    prod. nobloodnotears
     
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    axiom lil boosie with the wipe down

    Apr 1, 2016
    this is some interesting stuff. that first track had some really nice moments on it, i liked how the energy built up. that main riff was nice too. i liked the first half of nose ring, it was cool and relaxing. i wasnt feeling the second half that much, it just kinda gave me an anxious feeling. im gonna guess youre influenced by david bowie at least a bit, and he was never afraid to express how he felt and not care what others thought, and i feel like i can see that in this
     
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  6. ozy
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    thanks m8 really appreciate the feedback!
     
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    Eedee Who?

    Apr 1, 2016
    That beat was tight, you killed it haha. Also +1 to what Narsh said. That ending >
     
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  8. ozy
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    Apr 1, 2016
    thanks man. hopefully i'll end up making a finished version of this song eventually lol.
     
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    It's down?
     
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  10. ozy
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    yea i decided to delete it because it's unmixed and i wasn't happy with my performance. will put it on a project eventually tho.
     
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    Creation By Any Means

    Apr 28, 2016
    The something in the way sample :sweatt::sweatt:

    Id love to hear this mastered better, other wise, nice job man
     
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  12. ozy
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    May 6, 2016
    my college baseball career officially came to an end tonight :emoji_slight_frown: really sucks right now but definitely excited to pursue my only other love of music...album coming out soon.
     
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    May 6, 2016
    d--- man. Congratulations on being able to play throughout your college life at least.
     
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  14. ozy
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    May 6, 2016
    thanks m8! it's gonna be really weird since i'm 22 years old and baseball has never not been part of my life. extremely grateful that I have other passions like music tho
     
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    Jun 8, 2016
    new version...better mix still not finished yet.
    also it features Z now, who was somehow able to murder me just by doing backup vocals lol. enjoy. @CreativeSXN
     
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    Jun 8, 2016
    this slap
     
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    LasiK d-mn fine coffee

    Jun 9, 2016
    how u know Z? we got some tracks, me on the beat, z on the mic
     
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    it's all unmixed aside from "pheni", but i'd love to get some feedback from you guys. the official album is dropping december 2016.
    @CreativeSXN
     
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Oct 3, 2016
    Pheni is great imo
     
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