The Black Garden- Laced Fury

Started by BigBabyChris, Apr 20, 2016, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. BigBabyChris
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    Apr 20, 2016
    What's up ya'll. Wanted to get some feedback on some new s--- i did with the group. Of course constructive criticism is much appreciated.
    Enjoy!
     
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  2. TheMCommander
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    Apr 21, 2016
    lyrics and flows are on point. The only thing I didn't like was the transition from the 2nd verse into the third verse. I dont know why, the flow just sounded a little off on that point. I listened all the way through though which is a compliment because my attention span is trash!
     
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