I remixed God's Plan & Diplomatic Immunity

Started by sunrey, Feb 22, 2018, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Xdx
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    Xdx

    Feb 23, 2018
    You’re saying that your raps are bread though
     
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  2. Xdx
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    Xdx

    Feb 23, 2018
    I’m not saying that they don’t make sense, they just don’t have very much meaning. Sounds like you’re just saying random stuff with no real theme or meaning
     
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  3. sunrey
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    Feb 23, 2018
    Lmaooo you flip floppin now, im done w this. Have a good day
     
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  4. aquaberryares
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    aquaberryares one time I made sex

    Feb 23, 2018
    gurj is 13 and has some of the worst fake deep lines I ever heard (ie. Read). He doesn't rap btw he only posts his verses on forums, probably cus hes on that awkward puberty stage where ur voice cracks spontaneously. I wouldn't put too much weight on his critique
     
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  5. sunrey
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    Feb 23, 2018
    Ahh that makes a lot more sense lmao, thank you
     
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  6. sheldon
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    Feb 23, 2018
    ngl if you gotta work this much to defend your lyrics against fuccen gurj of all ppl you can safely assume you’re trash
     
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  7. sunrey
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    Feb 23, 2018
    im new here lol idk who anybody is
     
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  8. reesey
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    reesey What You Looking At This For?

    Feb 23, 2018
    new? nah
     
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  9. sunrey
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    Feb 23, 2018
    i made an account in early 2016 and that was the last time i posted until yesterday...
    tf is everyones problem around here?
     
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    reesey What You Looking At This For?

    Feb 23, 2018
    nobody has a problem, it's really just people fiending for conflict since the site's been slow today
     
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  11. Xdx
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    Feb 23, 2018
    But I do rap, I just don't show post my stuff cause I'm making a mixtape to send directly to OVO. And most people in that thread said the verse was good
     
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  12. Xdx
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    Feb 23, 2018
    :hoplease: What's that supposed to mean?
     
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  13. Xdx
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    Xdx

    Feb 23, 2018
    Not flip flopping. I said the lines don't make sense with a set theme. I didn't say they don't make sense on their own. It just feels like you're randomly putting lines together to fit a rhyme scheme. Not saying it's a bad rhyme scheme, just not a good use of the lyrics that you're using for the rhyme scheme
     
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  14. sunrey
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    Feb 23, 2018
    i just found out ur 13 so ima end this right here lol. good luck with ur ovo thing
     
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  15. Winter
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    Winter Super Comfy

    Feb 23, 2018
    Thread reads like a Rap Genius annotation

    The song is fine
     
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  16. Xdx
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    Feb 23, 2018
    You're going to end this based on me being 13? :lmaooo:
     
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