Rob A - "Beep Beep" (on my Cool Kids s---)

Started by RobA7, May 15, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. RobA7
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    May 15, 2015

    lyrics: genius.com/Rob-a-beep-beep-lyrics

    s--- bumps in the whip (like most Chuck Inglish beats do.) As always, would really appreciate feedback if you have the time! :emoji_thumbsup:

    @Jet @Narsh @Winter @LasiK @Cyreides @hank @NyKill @LynchedUp @Creation @Brubbels @Shaimbetov @King Simba @Dirty F @TiBon @M.I.C. @WPG @Axis @YaBoyTr @Alchemist34
     
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  2. FLORIDA MAN
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    May 15, 2015
    Where the f--- is my mention??

    I made you!
     
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  3. FLORIDA MAN
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    Oh nevermind there it is
     
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  4. RobA7
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    Haha I was gonna say...
     
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  5. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    May 15, 2015
    yeah mentions didn't work, should try copying them from notepad
     
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  6. RobA7
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    What did you think of this, Man?
    Also, did you see a week or so ago I put up an updated version of "2 Years"? The song that you helped "make me " with haha
     
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  7. RobA7
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    Weird. I have them saved in a page and I copy them over. Wonder why they aren't working...
     
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  8. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    May 15, 2015
    If they're formatted like ^this, with the link to their profile already made, and you copy it and paste it into a new post it's not going to work. Gotta make sure it's plain text pasted into a post when you post it (you also can't edit mentions into a post either, it only works when the reply is first posted).

    I keep my mention list from my threads and copy it into notepad and back from notepad. it's the easiest way, otherwise you have to type it all out
     
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  9. RobA7
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    Ohh, okay. Thank you, Dude.
    @Jet @Narsh @Winter @LasiK @Cyreides @hank @NyKill @LynchedUp @Creation @Brubbels @Shaimbetov @King Simba @Dirty F @TiBon @M.I.C. @WPG @Axis @YaBoyTr @Alchemist34
    So did this work? lol
     
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  10. Cyreides
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    still no lol
     
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  12. FLORIDA MAN
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    Stop mentioning me for this s---!
     
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  13. RobA7
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    Sorry, Bro. I was under the impression that the mentions didn't work the first two times.
     
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  14. Ordinary Joel
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    Either do the notepad thing or just highlight the text and click 'Unlink' before posting. Works either way. :brent:
     
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  15. BNF
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    lmao @n no one commenting on the actual track.

    Flow sucks and the vocals are low as f---. lol @ putting your lyrics on genius like anyone is tryina annotate this horseshit.

    Weak sauce.
     
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  16. RobA7
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    Thanks for listening, Bro. And thanks for the "constructive" criticism. Word of advice: when giving someone feedback, even if you're gonna trash them, try to give some advice on how they can improve so you don't come across as a complete prick. Lyrics are on Genius 'cause it's the nicest looking lyric site, not so they can be annotated. Have a good one :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  17. BNF
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    It isn't f---in rocket science, lmao. Work on your flow and raise the volume of your vocals. Pretty simple s---.

    "Now what you're seeing next
    Is my mom's Malibu
    Who you know who's this cool?"

    also, write some better g.d. lyrics, Jesus Christ.
     
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  18. RobA7
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    I'm new to mixing so that's something I'm working on.

    Those lyrics are clearly sarcastic, but I see what you're saying. I was high as s--- when I wrote this and it was just for fun. If you listen to anything else on my SoundCloud you'll realize I'm much better than that.

    And I thought my flow was pretty tight. Guess I was wrong and I'll work on it.

    You need to work on your people skills, you come across as a straight up a------.
     
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    I'm new to being friendly so that's something I'm working on, lmao.

    Nah man, you're right and I apologize. Though I still don't like the song I DO see the potential and should've been a little more constructive with my feedback. Cheers on being the bigger man and not stooping to my level.

    If that seemed sarcastic, I assure you, it isn't.
     
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