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[ropes] 3-track project

Started by Narsh, Aug 14, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Aug 15, 2015
    It's a dope drunk project tbh
     
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  2. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Aug 15, 2015
    Tianjin almost put me to sleep :ohno: Just sounded really monotone and like in the past it sounded like you nearly ran out of steam mate.

    Sounds is a really good track. You rode the beat really well. And sounded much more energetic.

    Count On Me (Ropes) is :wow: Probably my favourite track.

    You gotta work on your adlibs mang. 'Aye' and repeating the last word of a line can only go so far. :laff:
     
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    Aug 15, 2015
    A few pointers:

    "African AIDs Epidemic" is a dope concept, I like what u did there, but it would be much better as an acronym with the full name capitalized in parenthesis a la: "A.A.E. (AFRICAN AIDS EPIDEMIC)"

    The 2nd one is fire, no critique there

    3rd is on the right track, but would definitely benefit from more subtle stylization along the lines of: "hangin' w/ robin williams"

    The lower case ironically really helps highlight the gravity of the title's implication
     
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    Gimmie a break a wrote and record all the tracks in one afternoon (aka yesterday) :laff:

    But ur right I gotta switch it up more lmao
     
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

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    Do you do these songs in one take or multiple takes?
     
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    Multiple for sure and then try to stitch them together it's all very haphazard
     
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    Radeem I listen to people smarter than me

    Aug 15, 2015
    This is top notch ep. It's a nice change to hear you rapping a little bit slower. It's not monotone at all imo. I really love it.
     
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    Meero Ay ay ay

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    great project b!

    but where is my shoutout :em55:
     
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    Radeem I listen to people smarter than me

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    Shoulda paid more attention to my statuses :kapppa:
     
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    Aug 15, 2015
    favorite track?

    @CreativeSXN
     
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    Radeem I listen to people smarter than me

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    The first one is terrific. The rest is partially good or great.
     
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    worddd...im inclined to agree that the first one is the best but I think Count On Hope is better tbh

    i dont count on my hope, common sense has since spoke
    it says im a sinner who's confidence prone

    I like the singsong/melodic stuff I did on sounds a lot too but I know its kind of haphazard

    Tianjin and Count on Hope are deff two of the most well rounded tracks Ive done, which isnt saying much cause all that means is that I had a hook and s--- lol. usually, as you know, i just have long a--- verses and no structure
     
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    @Soldier the only n----- that hasnt chimed in yet :pfffft:
     
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    Man why is the ire inside of me like all the fire I'm using for furnishing pyres
    I'm richer than prior and prior to prizes I wished for enlightenment
    Learned it was foolishness got me a stupid b----
    Trophies and Trojans ripped, smokin on buddah sticks
    She part of the g--- like Elaine had been
    She stays in the lane that I'm sanctioning
     
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    Quoting your own lyrics

    [​IMG]
     
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    :wtf2wtf:
     
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    I wanna collab @Narsh
     
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    i dont collab with thugs :hehehe:
     
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    Meero Ay ay ay

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    first
     
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