s.s.s. cypher

Started by Narsh, Mar 31, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Mar 31, 2015
    this weeks cypher thingy

    think the mix turned out well this time :allears:



    Dreaming of the day I fluke and get some recognition
    Steady sipping syrups spirits whistle by like recess
    Hey honey, you seem stressed, she says
    I lean back act relaxed just for a second
    She aint know that I been steady sippin
    Its part of an affliction that we’ve all been infected with
    injected into iris hours after birth its morbid
    its addiction its calling like sirens
    appalling alluring the smallest endorphins to blossom
    leading you to toxins
    try em all like i did it
    catch em all like ketchum
    playing catch up with my lessons
    Dreaming of the day that she notices my seizures
    Seizes me from fear
    And the bottle I have near
    Drinking dreams like ever clear
    Boy am I ever clear
    I see the future vanishing
    Addiction is a tragedy
    But Im dreaming dreams happily
    drowning them in apathy
    But I know that she’ll be catching me
    If I slip

     
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  2. Fire Squad
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    Fire Squad Boss Don Biggavel

    Apr 1, 2015
    "Catch em all like ketchum" :lebron: This one was actually quite catchy and the vocals sounded great :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  3. Narsh
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    Apr 1, 2015
    :daps:

    the "theme" for this cypher was just "dreams" ...so i wrote about like this guy who's addicted and wants someone to notice. at first glance it seems like him and his chick, but i kind of wrote about like a son and his mom (cause your parents never seem to notice when you're caught up in some shittt nahmean)
     
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    Fire Squad Boss Don Biggavel

    Apr 1, 2015
    Haha yea we've all been in that spot at some point unless you're a boring person. I was thinking the theme was either your explanation or a girlfriend that was getting distanced because of the love of substance.
     
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  5. Narsh
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    sometimes i dont even know what im writing until im done :'( and this is definitely open to different interpretations :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  6. attila
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    Apr 1, 2015
    Sounds like some LL Cool J "I Need Love" inspiration track.
     
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  7. Narsh
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    :cam2:
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Apr 1, 2015
    Thoughts @Rodamon? I see u creepin fam
     
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  9. Rodamon
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    haha you got me. I don't know man, I think it is pretty good, I feel improvement from the last thing I heard from you. And the mixing helps.
     
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  10. aquaberryares
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    aquaberryares one time I made sex

    Apr 1, 2015
    I preferred some of the past ones. but this wasn't bad. i think your voice couldve fit the beat better and the voice fx threw me off a little as well
     
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  11. Narsh
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    Apr 1, 2015
    word, you mean the more hype ones? im working on a 3 track thing right now that i want to put in a week or two. tryin to take more time with these 3 then the ones i just record and upload the same day lol (yes, i only have the patience/attention span to work on 3 tracks before feeling the need to release something :hovcry:)
    :daps: yeah its easier for me to get a good mix when im not yelling like danny brown:westbrook3:
     
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  12. aquaberryares
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    aquaberryares one time I made sex

    Apr 1, 2015
    Yeah, but it's mostly the beat i think that could fit your style better cus your flow and lyrics are straight on this
    Looking forward to it tho, i feel it's smart for relatively unknown artists to put out small projects over full length tapes cus we all have a really short attention span these days haha. it's more likely most people will give you 8-12mins of their time instead of an hour if they don't really know who you are. :idk:
     
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  13. Narsh
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    yeah hahah i feel you, im surprised you guys actually listend to that last thing i put out cause it was like 8 or 9 tracks :'(
     
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    FreeAgent Resurrected like Jesus

    Apr 2, 2015
    Track was really short, but I really enjoyed it :clap:
     
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  15. Narsh
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    Apr 2, 2015
    Yeah these cyphes are only supposed to be around 16 bars. I don't think imma do em anymore tho and focus on actual songs

    Glad you liked it man..I think the mixing helped on this one
     
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  16. FreeAgent
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    FreeAgent Resurrected like Jesus

    Apr 2, 2015
    I enjoy the cyphers. You should definitely keep doing them even if they turn into a side project sort of thing.
     
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    CODEiNE DEMON One foot stuck in the tarpit of my ways

    Apr 2, 2015
    @Narsh you should keep the Cyphers up and hold on to the good ones a drop a little mixtape of them
     
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