selma50 freeverse

Started by Narsh, Mar 8, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Mar 8, 2015
    guy sent me this beat yesterday and I made this in my downtime. it came with the malcolm x intro and outro and all that jazz

    dude said he really liked the energy/vibe so i thought id share it..title's kind of a clickbait but oh well
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    lyrics:
    Parallel lines
    parallel minds
    Drinkin on wine
    Taking my times
    Making my lines
    Succient like a vine
    Sink down to the crime
    It’s the age its the time
    Its my age its my kind
    Its the brown not the white
    It’s the dark not the light
    We the sore eye defined
    More hide than fight
    So we deserve our demise
    Heard then surmised
    Into speeches that fly
    In one ear then out
    The other I doubt
    Is that we come from a common
    Mother it’s not
    our fault that we not
    Adam or Eve, even atoms are even
    And similar in reason
    We built from the same
    Molded from clay
    They snort too much yay
    They believe we’re mistakes
    Afraid of the tandem
    Struggling to bind us
    Us as in all them
    Included
    We the same blueprint
    Who are we foolin

    Different races
    same finish I am moving
    At a pace so fluid
    They afraid of the nuance
    Nuisance they label us
    Noose hangs around all the stable boys
    We never been inside the house
    The hatred had kept us out
    Separated the sections now
    Drinking on the watered cyanide
    from a fountain Found
    my life has been possible
    From losses they all had took
    By trying to correct the books
    look
    History
    Hs story meant to end in glory
    But that’s boring
    more aura forming from the sin within
    Darwin — illiegtimate
    We should help each other in the midst of it
    Swinging fists, poppin em pop em all
    Back and forth, lost in a cycle, warned
    Of the disciples storming on our mourning for a cause that they wont absolve
    Seldom held our own
    Just had our souls sold to the streets
    Selma50 find fifty solem activists that seek reprise
    Ripple quickly
    quench the thirst
    we’ve all been dying for our deeds
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  2. Young Sinatra
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    Mar 8, 2015
    d---, this is nothing like your previous tracks tbh, you improved a lot.

    Really nice flow, the beat is cool and the mixing is great, not feeling so much the lyrics but overall i like this.
     
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  3. Narsh
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    Mar 8, 2015
    i think its more that i just try a bunch of different things so its very hit or miss sometimes

    like im about to work on something today that's once again kind of back to the ignorant s--- haha

    thanks for listening/liking it tho :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  4. Zep
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    Mar 8, 2015
    pretty sick nice work :)
     
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  5. Charlie Work
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    Mar 8, 2015
    The best use of your voice/inflection/mixing that I've heard. Flow is a bit mechanic and the lyrics are kind of bland though.
     
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  6. Narsh
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    Mar 8, 2015
    yeah it was more of just a quick on the spot thing....appreciate the feedback :daps:
     
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  7. CSW
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    Mar 8, 2015
    the cover is cute
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Mar 8, 2015
    i cant put my finger on it but with the way i made it look, the dude in the back reminds of like a GTA cover or something :'(
    ..or maybe its morpheus. f--- i cant tell lol but it looks pretty cool
     
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  9. CSW
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    Mar 8, 2015
    you mean like the stylized shots they use in the art? yeah it's definitely got a sweet kinda vibe like that
     
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  10. pluto✰
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    Mar 10, 2015
    yeah, your voice should sound more like this tbh.

    like this but idk if it's your breath control but your flow is very staccato if you get what I mean. your words should flow together better
     
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