Jan 22, 2016 So far is garbage, I'd go as far saying its even a stain on his career ... While Love Game is written and executed much better 3rd verse reminds me of As The World Turns from a lyrical standpoint
Jan 22, 2016 Concept Album? Could dive into psychology. History repeating itself would be a good topic. Hit up Kendrick as a co writer lol. Some Weeknd/Lana esque nihilism as a replacement for the "Trailer Trash Middle Aged Slim Shady" Shtick he's got going on would be good (Against Hills/Dream Pop production) Would love a collab album with him and Joey Badass or him and K. Dot. There's gotta be s--- going on in his personal life he could talk about.
Jan 22, 2016 "So needless to say, I'm feelin' betrayed, snatch my house key off her key chain She jumps off 'Wee-Bey' from the Wire's d-ck now she's chasin' me with a cheese grater" first two lines are already atrocious
Jan 22, 2016 Love Game is actually really s--- lol, I thought I might of been over exaggerating when I first posted, but reading these lyrics now like what the f---? they are so f---ing bad lmao
Jan 22, 2016 He needs to start the storytelling aspects of his LPs again. Why not introduce new characters with traits and personality that both we could relate while also defying the general social mould. Build new stories. That's the Eminem I want.
Jan 22, 2016 Don't put the execution in consideration Now here she comes at full speed, she's racing at me, okay you wanna f--- with me, eh? Snatch the b---- out her car through the window, she screaming I body slam her on the cement, until the concrete gave And created a sinkhole, buried this stink ho in it Then pay to have the street repaved (The f---?) Woke up in a dream state In a cold sweat like I got hit with a freeze ray during a heat wave Guess I eventually caved though, cause she's laying next to me in bed, Directly aiming a gat at my head! She came at me at full speed, nothing could stop her I shot her five times and every bullet bounced off her I started to beg "No, please let go" But she swallowed my f---in' leg whole like an egg roll With one leg left, now I'm hoppin' around crippled I grabbed my pocket knife and sliced off her right nipple
Jan 22, 2016 "Woke up in a dream state In a cold sweat like I got hit with a freeze ray during a heat wave "
Jan 22, 2016 from a pure lyrical standpoint he can rhyme words and tell a story about complete random s--- (see; swallowing legs whole, freeze rays and heat waves) with absolutely 0 substance.
Jan 22, 2016 and having 0 substance is why i think MMLP2 isnt that good (Production/Hooks are a whole different story)
Jan 22, 2016 Copied from the Genius app, formatting was f----- And I don't care for a good percentage of recovery even though the popular opinion on here is that it's considered his best project after 2009 Opinions are opinions
Jan 22, 2016 If I asked someone to drop a quotable line from MMLP2 I'd either get nothing or really bad answers.
Jan 22, 2016 "Like G-Unit without the hyphen, I'm hyping 'em up And if there should ever come a time where my life's in a rut And I look like I might just give up, eh might've mistook Me for bowing out I ain't taking a bow, I'm stabbing myself With a f---ing knife in the gut, while I'm wiping my butt!" the way this is delivered makes it even worse
