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SIMHA | MIDAS

Started by Narsh, Apr 22, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Narsh

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  2. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    May 13, 2015
    That beat was :wow:

    Them lyrics were :brent:

    Your flow was :notbad:

    Overall is was great. I would've liked to hear more emphasis/punctuating of your rhymes, or even a bit of urgency in your voice to pump us up with (although that maybe would've contradicted your lyrics but eh). I've used the word laconic before, this time it was more coasting. If you were more emphatic it would've been A1 @Narsh.

    Just a suggestion. :daps:

    Just a suggestion, but I was digging it regardless.
     
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    rapmusik 4

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    [​IMG]
     
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    Fire Squad Boss Don Biggavel

    May 14, 2015
    Just heard the Lasik produced track and this new one you posted. Your flow stays being on point, I really liked the goldmine verse:wow:
     
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  5. Narsh
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    Narsh

    May 14, 2015
    thanks man i appreciate it. i like the lasik one a lot too :)
     
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    Lil Squeed French Montana Stan

    May 14, 2015
    Shout out to constructive criticism!
     
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    Narsh

    May 15, 2015
    thanks guys, and definitely appreciate any constructive criticism.
     
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    Narsh

    May 15, 2015
    so one of the thug leaks had an entire verse open and i was messing around recorded something to the track...but dont really wanna put it out haha.

    let me know if u wanna hear a thugger ft. simha rough cut :'( ill pm ya:ohno:
     
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    Narsh

    May 19, 2015
    this week's cypher (in a straitjacket)



    beat: Atarebeats – Time-pink-floyd-sampled-beat
    lyrics:
    inside of my eyes lives a lie and its: "why am i honestly all that parents provide
    To society, i should be banished and bail not available till I tell a tale of their whereabouts”
    Passion and empathy
    Tear us apart like some terriers terror in eyes is apparent
    Where was i on the night they survived and they cried and they smiled and they sighed
    I was mild for a while then i was wild on the outside
    Can’t repair what guile reveled in while i was celibate married to only my arrogance
    Aryan in my belief thats im better than carrying the cross of my family fairly firmly
    Rather be lost in the wind and Im surely and often just off on a binge
    Coffins and coughing and caught in the act of absolving when all of it builds up like toxins
    Simpler and prospects of living now slimmer cigarettes
    I inhale and a silhouette appears like a vignette
    A portrait alive in my sight and i digress
    I was alive then I hid and I regressed
    In instituions were nuisances are bundled in bunches
    But progress was made yes and often i thank them
    But its always been this cathartic of process that worked like a holistic absolvement
    writing my writtens and smitten by sedatives
    Im fearless when riding a rhythm, my scholarship
    ruined forever but im salvaging all i can

    @Cyreides @Peter Parker @CrypticCraig @craigy @Mike Tyson @Man On The Moon @Grimace @Michael Scott @Radeem @Ordinary Joel @Fire Squad @JCinator @FreeAgent @Sign Language @Pixel @Bleed @Sheriff Skippy @LasiK @Jet @Flacko etc
     
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  10. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    May 20, 2015
    Not sure what type of effect you put on your voice but that was kinda cool. :wow:
     
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    FreeAgent Resurrected like Jesus

    May 20, 2015
    About to head out but in for later :banderas:
     
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    Juney Dark Art Deco Killer Mango

    May 20, 2015
    I like it, just wish you were a tad louder mannnnn but other wise
    [​IMG]
     
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    That beat. That flow.:banderas:

    No complaints here. Loved every second of it.

    [​IMG]
     
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    YoungShelby K Dot

    May 20, 2015
    That's gooood
    [​IMG]
     
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    Narsh

    May 20, 2015
    thanks manee appreciate it
    :wiggins:
    ahh yea the beat was kind of too loud i think. good looks though :rejoice:
     
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    Narsh

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    i kinda just layered the vocals the entire time, with the dubs having some kind of phaser effect on them. usually theyd only be in certain areas but i kinda just duplicated the entire main track
     
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    Narsh

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    #GRYPHON #COMINGSOON

    here's an alt cover for now:

     
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    May 26, 2015
    Sounds dope mate :emoji_thumbsup: relaly liked the flow

    edit: ^ new EP?
     
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    Narsh

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    Just a single.

    But can I call it a single if it doesn't belong to any project yet?

    Who currs
     
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    Peter Parker your boy

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    Good looking out man :emoji_sunglasses:
     
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