Apr 11, 2015

This is just a small remix I did to one of @Narsh songs. Feedback is much appreciated! I know im not the best rapper, I rap for fun, but i want to be good, so constructive criticism is welcomed! And IK the subject matter is a bit cheesy but really this is all I can write about rn cus its all thats been going on in my life :P

http://picosong.com/VGZ4/

verse (starts 0:46) -


I used to think that I wanted somebody new

I used to think that I could get over you

find somebody new to replace you but since we've met all i think about is who? (you)

in your mind what do you see when you hear Perfect Day?

me, i see happiness aka your face

as much as you’ve hurt me i keep running (back)

so many tears you’d think that i had been (attacked)

the direction i am running in is unknown

the end of the race is near yet, hasn’t been discovered

i sit here thinking should i listen to my mother

i search the bible for wisdom of the Lord

advice and answers found but the question is

if its God speaking or the devil himself n

i try to find the stairway to heaven but i know I’m going down quicker than a led zeppelin

this problem that i have been dealt i hate and love cus without you i know how i felt

my feelings were ice cold but when i met you they seemed to sorta melt

So i wanted to ask you to prom but you asked me first, didn’t wait more than a minute i burst out and said yes

had the night of my life and now were going out yeah! Im proud to call you my girlfriend

 

Apr 11, 2015

@Young Sinatra

 

Apr 11, 2015

Going to check right now

 

Apr 11, 2015

I got your PM but never found time to chec it out my b. Will listen

 

Apr 11, 2015

if you haven't already, don't send this to ur gf

 

Apr 11, 2015

You gotta work on actually rhyming instead of rambling off (I have that problem too sometimes) and not mumbling m8

 

Apr 11, 2015

lol no one ik knows i rap. and i plan to keep it that way haha

 

Apr 11, 2015

If they don't know your dreams, then they can't s---t em down.

 

Apr 11, 2015

its not a dream.. why if someone likes to do something does it turn into it being my life dream?

 

Apr 11, 2015

When do I mumble/ramble off. not saying i dont, i just dont know where

 

Apr 13, 2015

bump