Best Posts: What makes a rhyme scheme flawless to you?

  1. Enigma
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    Enigma Civil liberties > Police safety

    Apr 23, 2017
    Delivery > rhyme scheme

    You can have the most complex rhyme scheme or simple rhyme scheme, if your delivery isn't good, it's not going to sound good. This is why when I hear "underground rappers" spit twenty thousand bars in under a minute, it does very little for me. Anyone can spit multis, that doesn't necessarily lead to a good song/music.
     
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  2. canyouduck
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    Apr 23, 2017
    Rhymescheme pedo has returned

    [11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
    [11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
    [11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
    [11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
    I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
    [11:36] cllmemayb14: :)
    [11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
    [11:37] juelzenclade20: ok r u rally 14?
    [11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
    [11:39] juelzenclade20: wher r u from?
    [11:40] juelzenclade20: im from dallas
    [11:41] cllmemayb14: no way! Im from arlington! Thats super close !! :-0
    [11:42] juelzenclade20: yeah do u hav a bf?
    [11:42] juelzenclade20: boyfriend?
    [11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
    [11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
    [11:43] juelzenclade20: yeah
    [11:44] juelzenclade20: can u send me a pic of yur face?
    [11:44] cllmemayb14: can we just meet up one day soon? Since we’re close 2 each other and discuss rhyme schemes? :emoji_wink:
    [11:45] juelzenclade20: yeah most def wutz ur name?
    [11:45] cllmemayb14: rachel
    [11:46] cllmemayb14: whats urs
    [11:48] juelzenclade20: ron
    [11:48] cllmemayb14: r and r lol :emoji_wink:
    [11:48] cllmemayb14: i can have my mom drop me off at the valley view tomorro nite about 6.
    [11:49] juelzenclade20: i’ll b ther
    [11:49] cllmemayb14: ok wht do u look like? Im biracial 5'5 106 big hips n big t*ts lol I’ll be sitting outside the theatre. I’ll wear a pink shirt, pink snapback and short jean shorts :emoji_wink:
    [11:49] juelzenclade20: black 5'6 n muscle stocky build. Imma wear a blue mavericks snapback n blue shirt
    [11:50] juelzenclade20: itz only gone be u rigt?
    [11:50] cllmemayb14: ya!
    [11:50] cllmemayb14: bring a condom, or 2! :emoji_wink:
    [11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
    [11:51] cllmemayb14: do u hv ur own place?
    [11:51] cllmemayb14: how old r u
    [11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
    [11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
    [11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
    [11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
    [11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
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    [11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
    [11:52] cllmemayb14: r-----ed pervert
    [11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl
     
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  3. Lucy
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    Apr 23, 2017
    the smilies give it the buffalo charm
     
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  4. canyouduck
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    Apr 23, 2017
    No it was someone else lol
     
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  5. Lucy
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    Lucy #1

    Apr 23, 2017
    lmao was this @Papa Buff pretending to b grill?
     
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  6. Enigma
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    Enigma Civil liberties > Police safety

    Apr 23, 2017
    Exactly. If multis are the center/forefront of your music, you're probably not making very good music. It's okay to incorporate these elements in your music as long as you're not focusing on just that *cough* Eminem *cough*
     
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  7. dkdnfbdjdkdddjdjfvcgfl
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    Apr 23, 2017
    agreed

    like it's impressive, but outside of how good it looks in a "worlds fastest most complex rapper" video or a page of the guiness book, it's s--- if its solely what the rapper is relying on. shouldn't have to do davinci code puzzle mental gymnastics to find out what someone is saying.

    the best rap sounds good.
     
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