My #1 rec would be to deliver it with more gusto and confidence like @ItsPwizz said. Practice and make tons of demos to experiment and find your voice—def post things from time to time to get feedback, but it's ok if you make 25 songs and only release one. There's a reason so many demo tracks from people like kanye leak, because he makes tons and tons of throwaways even 20 years into his career. Getting the garbage out of your head to find the good stuff is part of the process for any type of art.
Well; the mixing isn’t terrible. But ya I can barely hear you. I think you gotta work on your structure more and find a flow and delivery that suits you and the beat. Bring way more confidence in your voice. The second guy wasn’t on beat at all. But I could definitely understand him more. You guys just keep working at it.
I'll still handle a dude who posted your pics last night cause that wasn't ok at all. I know who that was. But still... You acted very not cool towards US.
