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Take Me Away (First recording)

Started by BigBabyChris, Mar 3, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. BigBabyChris
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    BigBabyChris

    Mar 3, 2015
    Up and coming artist needing feedback and criticism.
    Let me know what you think and enjoy.
     
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  2. Mikey
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    Mikey

    Mar 3, 2015
    Pretty Good. The way the vocals are layered sounds off though.
     
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  3. attila
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    attila

    Mar 3, 2015
    A lot better than @Narsh. Your flow is on point, beat is dope, sounds like some Bone Thugs influenced.
     
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  4. BigBabyChris
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    BigBabyChris

    Mar 3, 2015
    Thanks for the feedback, will definately work on layering vocals ,
    and yep I grew up listening to a lot of Bone so i'm heavily influenced.
     
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