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  1. DKC
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    DKC shortygonletmecrush

    Aug 1, 2021
    Dude no one here is trying to be mean or hate just to hate—this is a creative sxn and people are giving honest feedback, it’s the exact same issue all of your music has. Listen to @Winter and @902fre they know what they’re talking about. And if whoever texted you doesn’t see a difference between how blueface raps and how you rap they shouldn’t be giving you advice. You’ve improved for sure like that passage winter pointed out but you still fall into that monotonous off-beat flow.

    I know you don’t wanna hear this but the reason you get Spotify plays is from the (reused) features that you buy. Your verses bring those songs to a grinding halt when you come on with that robotic flow and offbeat rhymes. Study the passage winter mentioned and keep practicing and making demos. You don’t gotta release everything.
     
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  2. Wreckless
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    Wreckless

    Aug 3, 2021
    Listened to the track and agree with what people are saying about the delivery being a little rough.

    I was actually going to ask which one you were before even reading the comments because I thought the one rapping from 1:28 to 2:08 sounded off beat at times.

    If you compare that to the one who starts rapping at 2:30 it honestly sounds like 2 different leagues. The delivery on that last verse was fire.

    Good song. It's catchy. But I have to agree with what others are saying, your delivery does need a bit of work.

    Keep it up though, there's always room to improve. Getting the flow right isn't easy. Even veteran rappers don't always get it right.
     
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  3. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Egotistical

    Jul 30, 2021
    Hello ladies and gentledicks. my single No Friends featuring MC 2Whanne & HeadinaHoody is out now everywhere. Please go head and give ya boy a listen and some feedback and get ready for the full EP release coming soon.
    @CreativeSXN


     
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    Boos Nova Nation

    Aug 1, 2021
    :popcorn:
     
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  5. Antman
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    Antman No Cap

    Jul 30, 2021
    It’s like you hearing the beat on a delay
     
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  6. Antman
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    Antman No Cap

    Aug 2, 2021
    n----- you got a condition or something?
     
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  7. LasiK
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    LasiK d-mn fine coffee

    Aug 1, 2021
    Yes, I’m sure that your music is being listened to by Spotify staff and you’re not paying one of the hundred services who auto submit your music. Kind of like how you pay for these features. You’re not working with these people. You’re paying a service for these verses and beats.
     
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  8. LasiK
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    LasiK d-mn fine coffee

    Aug 1, 2021
    I’m not “hating” lol

    you need to get that rhetoric out of your mind. My criticism of your music hasn’t changed, it’s always remained the same. You need to stop believing that everyone on S80 is against you for some reason, but everywhere else thinks you’re a great rapper. I’ve been listening to rap for 20 years. I’ve been rapping for 10, producing for 10, and mixing for 10.

    even if your flow was 1/100th of a second off beat I’d be able to hear it.

    obvi I want people to flourish and grow as artists. it’s an expression of self. Music is beautiful. But you don’t take the criticism. You get offended and deny what ppl are saying
     
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  9. Winter
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    Winter Super Comfy

    Aug 1, 2021
    Man you actually had it from 1:28 - 1:46, you really don't hear any difference in how you're rapping in the first half of the verse compared to the second?
     
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  10. Antman
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    Antman No Cap

    Aug 2, 2021
    Lol submit to hiphopnmore. You have dope stuff
     
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  11. Antman
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    Antman No Cap

    Aug 2, 2021
    Oh s--- lol you’re the goat! Fan of your stuff actually
     
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  12. Antman
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    Antman No Cap

    Aug 2, 2021
    You’re lasik?
     
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  13. DKC
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    DKC shortygonletmecrush

    Aug 1, 2021
    Like I’m really not trying to be an a------. I think if people like doing any type of art they should do it regardless of skill level. But if you’re looking to improve and hone your craft you should listen to the criticism here. This is a forum full of people who have been listening to, dissecting, discussing, and/or making rap for decades. It doesn’t mean every single one of us is an expert but it does mean that a lot of people already know how to give good constructive criticism because we’ve been practicing it thru posting since like 2002 lol
     
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  14. Mudkip
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    Mudkip RIP 3PAC

    Aug 1, 2021
    I don’t wanna be mean cuz anyone can get better but ^

    What do you love about hip hop? What made / makes you wanna rap? And what keeps you going after years of hearing the same feedback? Genuinely asking
     
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  15. LasiK
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    LasiK d-mn fine coffee

    Aug 1, 2021
    you just can’t rap man :dunno
     
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  16. LasiK
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    LasiK d-mn fine coffee

    Aug 1, 2021
    “If anyone says something bad it’s out of spite”
    The absolute worst mentality to have.
     
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