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Started by Victim, May 8, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Victim
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    Victim

    May 8, 2015
    Just some s--- i wrote and recorded today. Feedback is Appreciated
     
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  2. RobA7
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    RobA7

    May 8, 2015
    This is ill, Dude. But I feel like the end needs another verse, a beat switch up, or just needs needs to be shortened. Besides that, I really enjoyed it. Hit you with a follow on SC :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  3. Victim
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    Victim

    May 8, 2015
    Thanks dog. And yeah i didnt realize till i upped it how much longer the d--- beat went on haha. Ill for sure shorten that up or add a verse
     
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  4. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    May 8, 2015
    Dope stuff, great work man.
     
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  5. princedeville
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    princedeville

    May 8, 2015
    dope vibe! keep working on the flow!
     
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  6. rapmusik
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    May 9, 2015
    I like. really good, m8. flow could use some tweaking but it's not bad!
     
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