Oct 14, 2022

After reading @RipperRoo72 's feedback I was more compelled to listen. I made it all of the way through Revelations #9 and about a third of Magic before I had to shut it down. The overall quality is unlistenable. You're moaning that people are telling you to buy a better mic but that's exactly what you need to do. You've made an entire EP so you're clearly serious about this but unless you can make a project that isn't jarring to listen to them you're going to fail.

The good points? We'll, there's only one really. Admittedly your ability to pen rhymes is quite good. But please don't grab onto that and say "thank you for your feedback, I know this blah blah blah". It doesn't matter because everything else is a---.

The bad points?
You're overemphasizing every syllable to make it so painfully clear that you're rhyming multi syllables. It just sounds like you're rapping after recovering from a stroke.

Audio quality of your vocals is by far the worst thing and ultimately what made me turn it off. Seriously, invest in some decent hardware and decent mixing software if you're even 60% serious about this and wanting to improve.

The Em biting is so cringe. f--- off with throwing a kitchen sink at someone. Wtf man. Em can get away with s--- like this because he's been in the game for 20+ years and earned his stripes. Not you. When people say you need to get inspiration from other rappers, they don't mean Lil Yachty or some s--- like that. There are plenty of lyrical rappers that flow like butter over beats and work with beats that are suited to them you could gain inspiration from. If you swoon over Em all the time then you're just going to be a one trick pony and we all know how his fan base has been in constant decline in recent years so now is not the time to 100% be biting Em.

 

Oct 4, 2022

Don't tag EmSXN when it's not Eminem related.

 

Oct 14, 2022

fa----

 

Oct 14, 2022

It’s not the feedback he wanted but it’s definitely the feedback he needed.

 

Oct 14, 2022

 

Oct 13, 2022

Just listened. I’m gonna be honest, this was a---. I’m gonna be harsh in this review because no one else here that bothered to listen will be. You need this wake up call. At first I thought you were trolling with this music. It sounds like you recorded with the lowest quality microphone possible while raising your vocals so high in the mix that the beats can barely be heard. I guess that’s not so bad though considering most of the beats were garbage, sounding poorly produced and boring. Only good beat I remember was the Don’t Front beat you took from Eminem.

Speaking of Eminem, you rode his d-ck the entire time. The constant references to him were cringe. You trying to completely emulate his style by having a bunch of nonsense rhymes, calling new rappers out, making your voice nasally, etc. sounded terrible and corny as f---. Even if we remove the distracting fact that you’re dickriding and copying Eminem the whole time, the songs are just boring. The only positive aspect is that sometimes your rhymes and storytelling can be good, but that’s only because you’re copying Eminem.

I feel like I learned nothing about you or your life. This music had no effect on me other than making me cringe. This music is not memorable other than for the fact that it made me laugh at how bad it is. What I got from this music is it sounds like all you do is listen to Eminem all day. Maybe listen to other artists and get a life. Maybe try to actually have something that’s at least somewhat your own style. It’s one thing to be inspired by Eminem, but you are clearly biting him hard here.

I know this all might sound rude, but you need to hear this or else you might not change at all, forever being an artist who copies Eminem. Is that what you want? If so, keep doing what you’re doing. If not, take some of my advice

 

Oct 4, 2022

You're not more special than all the others trying to promote their music so use the correct section.

Also f--- off with the D12 and Eminem group tags. People sign up to these groups to get tagged for Em or D12 related stuff. So use the creative tag c----.

 

Oct 14, 2022

Stfu soy boy.

 

Oct 14, 2022

OP is r-----ed.

 

Oct 13, 2022

Let me introduce you to @thecanibus

 

Oct 14, 2022

Really don't get the hate tbh. CSW is a vet on here and made a tasteful tribute to Marshall. Mic sounds great too

You lames wish you ran the Em sxn like he does!

 

Oct 14, 2022

Take your meds son

 

Oct 13, 2022

Inb4 @joeyp363 says this is AOTY

 

Oct 5, 2022

Next level stuff indeed

 

Oct 5, 2022

True that was a bit mean of me, but like you need to at least try to develop your own rapping style... it just sounds like you're doing your best Eminem impression for the entire album and it gets boring to listen to