FANZIK - LABELS (CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PLEASE)

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  1. Fanzik
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    May 22, 2015


    My third rap ever.
     
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  2. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    May 22, 2015
    @Narsh, @Cyreides

    The mic quality was low. Your flow wasn't riding the beat that well and there was a point in the song where your rap cut off and jumped instantly into the hook?

    Also you probably could've cut the song length by half considering you didn't rap after that point. @Fanzik
     
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  3. Fanzik
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    May 22, 2015
    The audio-jack on my laptop is messed up, so I can't use headphones and listen to the beat while I rap lolz.
     
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  4. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    May 22, 2015
    Guess you'll have to save up and either get your jack repaired or get a new laptop. :brent:
     
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  5. Fanzik
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    May 23, 2015
    bump
     
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  6. bijanamir
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    May 23, 2015
    Hundo p agree with @Ordinary Joel you absolutely need to hear the beat while you rap or else you'll be totally off beat and it'll be a mess. But keep at it, invest in the equipment, it'll really help a lot.
     
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  7. Fanzik
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    May 23, 2015
    Do I have to force-time everything? Like, do I have to force myself to rap something in 25 seconds rather than 30 seconds--which would be the natural--because I know the beat changes after 25 seconds?
     
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  8. bijanamir
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    May 23, 2015
    No no not at all, it'll be the same as how you do it but you'll have a sense of the beat and timing and it'll just come out much cleaner
     
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  9. Fanzik
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    May 24, 2015
    How can I time my rapping so I finish doing my verse before the beat switches?
     
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  10. bijanamir
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    May 24, 2015
    Cut down your verse of yeah speed some things up in your flow
     
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