Feb 1, 2026 at 6:48 PM

hope you guys enjoy

 

Feb 2, 2026 at 5:26 AM

And........breathe lol

I think it sounds better when u punch in like on here instead of one long take.

Nice work mate

 

Feb 2, 2026 at 9:46 AM

i appreciate the feedback. recorded this some time ago and been working on delivery a lot since then. bro did you notice i rhymed 14 syllables in a row on that last line?

 

Feb 2, 2026 at 9:52 AM

Of course you know I've an ear for lyricism

 

Feb 3, 2026 at 3:17 AM

This is an improvement in the sense that you sound slightly less like Eminem here than you do on your previous tracks. I think you should keep going in this direction of shedding the Eminemisms. Be yourself and your music will be better for it. You can still make complex rhymes without being Eminem. I liked the LCD line. I’m not a fan of the instrumental. I know you wanted it minimal to focus more on the bars but this beat is so minimal it might as well not even be there. Not trying to be mean just being honest.