My Second Hip Hop Beat

Started by Renovator, Jul 24, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Renovator
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    Jul 24, 2015
    After receiving good feedback from my first beat I though id produce another

    Please check it out guys and feedback would be really appreciated

     
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    PVRO King of all things Pepe's

    Jul 24, 2015
    The player is broken for me
     
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  3. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Jul 24, 2015
    Like this one better.

    Feel like it could use some more EQing and reverb on the piano tho. Right now it sort of feels empty around it and the notes just poke through the beat too clearly, if that makes any sense
     
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    I know exactly what you mean and I'm on it:emoji_thumbsup:
     
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    My first 15-20 beats sounded like a---. Yours is fine, i mean you can tell it is a beginner beat and the mix could be better but i think it is really good for a second beat.
     
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    Thanks for the feedback man

    When I say it's my second beat it's my second hip hop beat because usually I produce EDM music but I wanted to change my style and test the waters with it
     
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    Try accessing it on a computer
     
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    PVRO King of all things Pepe's

    Jul 26, 2015
    just took a listen and those vocal sample was good af just bring it out a little more, i found it too low. main piano sounds too... how should i say... bland? maybe at a little bit of delay and reverb on it, not too much but enough to give it an echo just a bit and it should be good, especially on that other piano you have coming in on what i think is the chorus. other than that i like it. good job :clap:
     
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    Jul 28, 2015
    if it's ur real second beat, u have potential. Start learning about equalization, compression and mixing entirely.
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    Thanks man

    Im watching some tutorials on it today
     
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