Aug 12, 2015

this weeks cypher



let me know what you think slime

@CreativeSXN

I been in the end zone I been off them benzos I barely believe that my purpose is meant to/
Ive sinned like a sinner I been late for dinner Im just a beginner and d--- this is difficult/
Ive never been comfortable, but lately Im buzzing cuz I wanted to/
I wanted you, dirty diana obstacles/

Dodging em, on my way to you/
Causing doom like MF do/
Im racking up give you the cue/
Get a clue why you feelin blue/
Money comin in through vehicles/
fighting the friction they selling to you/
igniting the instances memorable/
resisting the urges on centerfolds/
mixing the worries with minerals/
rocking a vest to perform a show/
not just in jest or to protect my soul/
they aint know man they ont know/
the paper been dirty since seven years old/
waking up early to get me roley/
i was born in a kiln man breaking the mold/
you couldn’t handle the heat that was coming from stoves/
the heat in the kitchen but cooking no dope/
man we were broke/
my mamma a stunna she made me feel home/
home cooked meals upon the stove/
first lost in india then we eloped/
my family fantasized ravishing homes/
feeling like sherlock when I was alone/
But watson was missing and so were the holmes/
vagabond vanity vanishing prose/
my words were the reason that they could feel hope/
but then i went silent not radio prone/
no SOS my sanity strewn/
panic in rooms, recognizing no moons/
tantalizing buffoons, pro at severing sewn/
stitches that sutured us together to cope/
im mixing elixers im high on broom/
no nevel im several more levels of dope

 

Aug 12, 2015

Honestly thought this was another diss for the OT sxn

But it's p good m8

 

Aug 12, 2015

Thanks man

 

Aug 12, 2015

This is great man, as per usual


i was born in a kiln man breaking the mold/
you couldn’t handle the heat that was coming from stoves/
the heat in the kitchen but cooking no dope/

 

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Aug 12, 2015

fire

 

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Aug 13, 2015

Your flow is good man, but something doesn't sit with me well..
I can't be too sure if its the mixing of the vocals or your delivery!

Either how its comes of as a really clean mix, a bit too clean which, at least in my opinion, calls for a dirtier mix/beat.

But thats just my opinion!

 

Aug 13, 2015

I think, lyrically, narsh might be one of the best rappers I listen to.

 

Aug 13, 2015

yeah d--- i defintiely see what you're sayin...i could've made it more "gritty" for sure...this beat was hard to mix with in general tbh

thanks for peeping man

appreciate the love man...writing comes easy to me. im not even proud of any of hte s--- ive written in like the last year or so lol...if u ask @Jet or someone my writing used to be way better on SL but I was a awful at rapping then (now im okay). to be honest i dont think ive spent more than 15 mins on a single verse this past year