Sep 3, 2015

im done posting these on reddit, but now that we have someone else who does them semi regularly like @Agee Flame we should get them going for this creative sxn

i nominate @Purspective to jump in w/ a verse this week as well

any ways, here's mine:


lyrics:
this is my beat and all y’all visiting
coming each week and talking bout smilies
wordplay, multis
“you really need to focus your vocal delivery”
no that aint working b
no1 is stopping me
call me a prodigy, mamma always proud of me
i got my own style, own fans, a monopoly
you stand no chance like I sliced at your arteries
Killing these bills with a Hanzo honor me
Feeding my family honestly, sometimes….
….im bored with these pieces of trash all recycling
sounding like backpackers on vicodin
ransacked canvas i paint prophecies
im the new king kiss rings call majesty
this is how i do things you bring travesty
ruining ur name and all of your family’s
bringing others down just to drown in ur misery
i think i get it now im not allowed to be anything
inside of a box is where they hone efficiency
stop it im hercules
common occurrences
everyone welcoming what they feel assurance with
treat me like im their nemesis narsh is the enemy
simha a demon a god is his pedigree
fallen like angels or moons thats our lunacy
0-100 no stop full throttle
my balls in her mouth ya your moms she swallows
she was about to give me feedback im hollow
speechless on her knees
yeah she a model



@CreativeSXN

 

Sep 3, 2015

First

Liking these cyphers. Really enjoyable.

 

Sep 3, 2015

Dope s--- bro.

 

Sep 3, 2015

good looks man glad you like it!

i think this mightve been my best mix ever lol or at least one of the better ones. im gettin better at it finally.

thanks for the feedback famo

 

Sep 3, 2015

got some headphones

 

Sep 3, 2015

oh fire does that mean you wanna play catch up?

https://forum.sectioneighty.com/ropes-3-track-project.t40315/

https://forum.sectioneighty.com/planning-for-riches-prod-by-kilu.t41345/

 

Sep 3, 2015

is this the tone of your voice you're gonna start running with? (haven't heard too much of your other recent s---)

your voice hasn't changed too much but you're learning to ride beats much better so your voice almost "works" now.

sidenote: a GOOD amount of this song sounds like preset drake (which isn't a bad thing but a lot of similar flows, especially in the first half).

 

Sep 3, 2015

nahh my delivery is all over the place still depending on my mood and/or the beat. but yeah i think the main difference between then & now is my ability to ride a beat, like you said.

dont see the drake thing but hey it sounded like a good thing so ill take it

 

Sep 3, 2015

bump

 

Sep 3, 2015

Spell speechless right and I'll consider listening

 

Sep 3, 2015

 

Sep 3, 2015

Good delivery but I don't like raps about rapping

 

Sep 3, 2015

which is why you should listen to the f---ing song i made with u in mind/biting some of travis's swag that ive been asking you to and not a random cypher i made to piss of people on reddit who tell me to change my voice

smfh, sigh, etc.

thanks for listenin doe

 

Sep 3, 2015

Lank me I'm too lazy and mgsv is almost downloaded

 

Sep 3, 2015

jesus christ b this is worse than tryina bag a chick off tindr using just "netflix & chill"

https://forum.sectioneighty.com/planning-for-riches-prod-by-kilu.t41345/

 

Sep 3, 2015

Bro I already posted in there like 5 times

 

Sep 3, 2015

And I wouldn't get that reference because Im a virgin. Probably because I didn't go to college.

 

Sep 3, 2015

oh s--- lmfao you didnt tag or quote me in anyway so i never checked

reading ur feedback now, love u bb

netflix and chill?

 

Sep 3, 2015

I would but I'm not in college

 

Sep 3, 2015

true i only chill with college b------s