Sep 28, 2015

https://www.wattpad.com/story/50361319-the-sun-doesn't-always-shine-even-when-it's-bright

You'll need an account to read it but it's easy to make. Pretty much this is a story based on my life but I turned it into a fictional movie. It's where I become happy but suffer a few setbacks from achieving my goal. The first 4 chapters are real events that happened then around chapter 6 titled 'Finally' everything becomes a figment of my imagination. Doing this for a grade in school so I'd love to get some feedback, good and bad. I'm also not the best writer and I wrote most of the chapters on my tablet which is like 6 years old and slow so sorry if there are grammar and punct errors. I didn't want to share this because I was afraid of being judged for things I talked about in this story. I made a few posts about my depression on here in the past but never went into detail. This is it, hope you guys enjoy even though most of it is fake but HOPEFULLY it'll become a reality for me in a few months. I'm fine btw, been dealing with my depression a lot better than I was a few months ago. Currently passing all of my classes with all A's. Life is decent for now.

EDIT: If creating an account is too much work for you, I've decided to link the chapters in order. The catch is though you might not be able to read some of the chapters in its entirety because they blurred them out after so many words so if you're not signed in. if you don't care about that here they are
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/169627656
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/169832854
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/169849617
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/169862368
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/169991714
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/170009841
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/170123928
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/170973747
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/170993997
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/171361288
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/171485524
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/171514847
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/171872482
https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/50361319/write/171984933

 

Sep 28, 2015

this is my legacy, ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

 

Sep 28, 2015

Btw not done with this story I'm supposed to get 20 chapters by next week. I'm at Part 9 if I'm not mistaken. I will post 2 chapters every day and if I get good feedback I'll keep working on it after the 20th chapter. it should be done by that point though.