Oct 17, 2015

 

Oct 17, 2015

hahah i kinda get what u mean...the flow is just addictive imo...the way the beat flutters is what got me to want to try it. its something thug obviously pulls up really well on tracks like this:

 

Oct 17, 2015

rt

 

Oct 17, 2015

flow pretty good on the hook.

But I feel this is my least favorite outta the 4.
It's either the voice or maybe something else I can't quite put my finger on.
For now: 3>1>2>4

 

Oct 17, 2015

I have the same criticism for everything: I don't think you should be doing Thug/Future type stuff. That doesn't sound like who you are. I'd rather hear a s-----y original band than a decent tribute band an day. Still u

 

Oct 17, 2015

pretty sure this is mixed the worst out of the first 4...was hard to get rid of the "s" and s--- and still keep the auto tuned fx i wanted

the voice was definitely the most out there on my 2nd track lol (the why they waaaait joint that u thought was wide awake haha)

 

Oct 17, 2015

lazy on ur part tbh but its not like i dont get what youre saying.

i just dont care to be a "s-----y original band" rn

 

Oct 17, 2015

not to mention my writing is its own beast compared to future and thug lol, its not the same. i just take vocal cues from them to help me improve over time. and im making better music now than ever before, so /shrug

plus they dont have my brown boi swag

 

Oct 17, 2015

Prolly my least liked song.

 

Oct 17, 2015

It's okay

 

Oct 17, 2015

nah, nah, shouldn't be like that. if you don't feel comfortable bumping your own music in the whip, it's not good enough.

 

Oct 17, 2015

I do bump my own music, I'm just not expecting anyone else to

 

Oct 17, 2015

yeah that's not good either

I mean you can say you make the music for yourself but who doesn't wanna be appreciated? plus if other people like your music and bump it, that'll help it grow

challenge: make a song, doesn't necessarily have to have a strong topic but the lyrics should sound less "scattered" than they do rn. HAVE A HOOK. a song isn't gonna catch on unless it's well, catchy of course. you're an excellent writer so none of this should be a challenge tbh

as far as what voice to use, well that's entirely up to you but I don't really wanna hear your thug voice anymore unless it sounds like your best friend remix every time

just ma 2 cents

 

Oct 17, 2015

bumping s--- in ur whip/public isnt the only way to appreciate music

there are more hooks on this project than ive ever done lol, but yeah my verses/s--- are always a lot less structured. ill definitely try.

 

Oct 17, 2015

noo, I'm saying if other people are bumping your s--- (in general) on their own time, they'll spread your music.

literally, being a rapper in college IS the plug. focus on making somewhat of a following on your campus.

unfortunately I'm not in college rn but when I go downtown, a lot of people know me. when I dropped rainbow in the dark, I'd literally have the song and my headphones ready and stop EVERYONE and play it for like any random person lmao

I've had some good experiences like that and and met some pretty cool a--- people, you should try the same

 

Oct 17, 2015

btw just wrote a song re: ur challenge already.

except a pm @ some point if i get to recording and s--- tn (i had a hook in my head for the last day or so)

 

Oct 18, 2015

mkay, finding the right beat to match your voice & how you rap is just as important. remember dat.

 

Oct 18, 2015

accepted & completed [✓]

 

Oct 18, 2015

that's a cute check mark

 

Oct 18, 2015

i know i copied it from google cuz i dont kno the short cut and i needed a ✓ for my convo w/ @Jaya to b cute n s---

and now i wanted to get as much use out if it as possible b4 i copy something else ✓