Overdose trilogies

Started by DoCtaGriLLz, Aug 1, 2016, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. DoCtaGriLLz
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    Aug 1, 2016
    Inarticulate after a dose of barbiturates
    ju know what it is, When i run up in barmitzfahs ,its-
    Doctorgrillz, aka, mr love big t-ts
    holding a glock that weighs as much as the gwap of the british
    I drink a gallon of tylenol, fall asleep,
    go through my withdrawal while watching reruns of dawsons creek
    The belly of the beast is here when vicodins peak
    in my system, I feel a glitch when i'm grinding my teeth
    Getting tired of being wired all day and night
    from 6 cups of cofee and ephedrine, risking my life
    for this dead end job,
    sweating like a laboring fob
    enterered my iterview
    Looking like a brain dead slob
    a bum who cant even afford corn on the cob
    So i popped a couple of Pills
    and started to sob
     
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  2. CSW
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    Aug 2, 2016
    great piece real liked the imagery. i took points off though because the simpsons already rhymed "jobs" with "brain dead slobs" in marge v monorail ;D
     
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    Aug 2, 2016
    Thanks fam
     
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