Feb 9, 2017@tpk the problem with a lot of your stuff i think is the delivery, before we can even get to the lyrics it's rly hard to understand you sometimes and sometimes you kinda just travel off beat and it sounds like you jumble up. i'd say slow it down and don't be afraid to cut up the verses and punch in to fit everything in without having to stop and play catch up later cause it throws off a lot of your rhyming and makes u really hard to understand a lot of times
