The Dove (prod. relevant beats)

Started by LasiK, Oct 6, 2017, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. LasiK
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  2. sheldon
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    Oct 6, 2017
    i actually really like this bro. your voice could have been a bit more energetic tho (i get you were going for the depressed chill flow but i could used a bit more imo)

    actually pretty great song. sounds like something that could have landed on XXXTentacion's album
     
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    good song would be better with better mixing
     
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  6. nineteen99
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    this s--- fire if u like u can send me all your stems, i'll mix it better I think... :emeh:
     
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  7. LasiK
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    Appreciate it but nah, I've been mixing for years. Entire albums under my belt. The mixing is intentional.
     
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    oh ok, what u mean by entire albums like yours or just albums by artists, cuz if it's the latter I do that also, edit out stuff too
     
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    the beginning sounds like you rapping under a fishtank, the vocals are not mixed well man
     
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    that's a flanger
     
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    Yeah they're still too loud though, I get wanting people to hear you but it may turn ppl off you know what im saying
     
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    Oct 8, 2017
    this is dope i f--- with it , cool vibes
     
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    real chill. like it!
     
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    thanks for sharing fam
     
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