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TRUNKS FREESTYLE

Started by Narsh, Dec 17, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Slyk
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    Slyk God made a prophet.

    Dec 18, 2015
    Rly thought this was a dbz rap. Leaving thread disappointed now.. :sad:

    Edit: I came back. Pretty solid tbh. Clear influence in there ya still need to separate yourself from a bit.
     
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  2. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Dec 18, 2015
    Yeahh s----s dope unless u have other plans for it
     
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  3. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Dec 18, 2015
    no plans for it, like I said, use it for what you will
     
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  4. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Dec 18, 2015
    no surprise album, might as well pop that new simha in the tape deck
     
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  5. pluto✰
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    pluto✰ where the opioids?

    Dec 18, 2015
    I think the mixing could use some heavy work tbh..a lit of the second vocals or punch ins, not sure what they are don't sound right when they come in. doesn't sound as smooth as it could be.

    but, the production is excellent..
     
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  6. JG2
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    Dec 18, 2015
    this is nice af
     
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    dkdnfbdjdkdddjdjfvcgfl

    Dec 18, 2015
    :ehh:
    Huh, not bad fam. Solid piece of work.
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Dec 18, 2015
    it might be because i mixed on my beats instead of normal headphones...the beats pick up s--- u cant normally hear and that throws off my decisions i think idk though.

    i persoanlly thought the mix was good :wow2:
    whew
    ayy thanks man
     
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  9. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Dec 18, 2015
    yeah i just need to make it a more well rounded track with a small or hook something as u said. havent had time
     
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  10. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Dec 18, 2015
    yeah idk where the hook for this even came from lmao. like i said it was a freestyle under pressure and some how the vibe from the beat made me name drop trunks and make it the hook :whew:
     
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  11. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Dec 18, 2015
    @YoungDirtyBastard
     
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    Dec 19, 2015
    why u tag me honny
     
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  13. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Dec 19, 2015
    For your opinion TBH shoulda tagged @Young Slime
     
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    Young Slime

    Dec 20, 2015

    h--- yeah Young Slime x Narsh collabo on the way bout to f--- this forum up
     
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    Dec 20, 2015
    nash ill f--- u up fagot
     
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  16. Narsh
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    Dec 20, 2015
    :ummmm:
     
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    Dec 20, 2015
    keep wlyringas
     
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  18. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Dec 20, 2015
    only thing u f---in up is the english language
     
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    Dec 20, 2015
    ur a s-----y mod foh
     
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  20. Cyreides
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    Cyreides gfy

    Dec 20, 2015
    nah, pretty d--- good one. basically run this sxn
     
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