Jun 19, 2015

http://www.sharebeast.com/adbyl8csm5g9
Entered a contest where you write 16 bars to a beat and email it to the facebook page admin. Just wanted some feedback on my verse.

 

Jun 19, 2015

aint downloading s--- to tell u the truth

 

Jun 19, 2015

soundcloud that b----

 

Jun 19, 2015

Lyrics:
Im sellin on the streets like i was a newstand,
Meanwhile you stuck sellin ya foodstamps,
f----- up big time went off to bootcamp,
Done with that s--- now im a new man,
Re emerged and was eager to be first,
Place f--- all the cheaters i had a rebirth
Even though i be cursed i see words and freeverse
Leap feetfirst i got extreme thirst
Gotta make this rap career happen here
I have the gear now hurry make stacks appear
I have this fear that half a year from now crap will steer
My ragged sheer passion back to fear
But i got the muse so prop the fuse and watch my career top the moon unstoppable
Im not confused on what i want to do i got the fuel
So breathe in the noxious fumes.,

 

Jun 19, 2015

Not bad. Not really a fan of the way you layered your vocals.