bet i been the villain (prod. by spooki)

Started by Narsh, Apr 15, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Apr 15, 2015
    round 2 for the night real quick before my lap top dies and i go to sleep...an oldish verse i found that the producer i recorded for never did anything with. so i went and mixed it myself cause ive been gettin a little more of a feel for my own vocals

    think it came out pretty :emoji_fire:

    let me know what you think as usual :daps:

    beat: Spooki-beats – Somebody-needs-to-k----this-with-a-verse-asap
    lyrics:
    takin off
    like icarus
    i got a b----
    right into it
    intimate
    my mini me
    from italy
    not india
    but in the indigo
    f---in
    we sniffin it on the go lucky
    that my PO aint f--- with me
    im sorry i got low tolerance
    for her hollerin’
    now thats she’s a fan of me
    or actually its blow you see
    she’s doubtin me
    she bet i been the villain
    but she on me,
    she be bonnie she be thinking
    Im hiding all of my feelings
    Kingpin
    Im Clyde and now I know it
    I was Jekyll now I’m broken
    Splitting persons in my aura
    Spitting verses that are sorta
    For her or her aura
    She a slut thats Gomorra
    Sodomy and more importantly
    She smoked a lot weed
    I am honestly not a motherfuckin mockery
    I been buzzin constantly like I got addy in my genes
    i got a baggie up my sleeve
    i shoulda had in my kicks
    f----- up constantly in all of their oculars
    But I’m cockin’ for a bird to burst
    Shooting skeet pull it aim throw it back in reverse
    More on that later first snort all that paper work
    I’m making all this dough today like I was doing my mother’s work
    Sometimes I be wondering
    What wife would have it worse
    My moms with her chores
    Or this whor- I adore
    Would buy her a store
    Put a mall on her wrist
    Thats a small fortunate gift
    Aw aint that some s---
    Im god in the flesh
    Honestly Im just bored with myself
    Stuck in a pattern like a maze in a h---
    i inhale i exhlae
    Im amazed I can dwell
    Morphing like Im Cell
    Lovin on myself
    The circles of h---
    Urge me to fail
    why Aren’t you scared
    Why am I here
    Why does she stare
    I am aware Im a titan that’s rare
    That’s Midas: prevail through my iris
    I am frightening
    I will lose them to the gold
    At least they wont turn to the angel dust
    Or rust
    Im on one
    Im gone for a month
    Be back with a blunt
    Man am I blunt
    d--- she’s a c----
    Average as f---
    But she’ll marry me huh
    Actually nah
    she can probably do better than moi
    @Cyreides @M.I.C. @LasiK @Jet @Mikey1990 @Slyk @Man On The Moon @Grimace @IAmReal @Michael Scott @Radeem @Bleed @Fire Squad @JCinator @FreeAgent @Sign Language @Creation @BoshtrichBurger @Skippy :skip:
     
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    Juney Dark Art Deco Killer Mango

    Apr 15, 2015
    Strangely Young Thug has turned you into a monster, I love how you've improved.
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  3. Narsh
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    Apr 15, 2015
    killin it with the gifs tho :laff:

    would find my own gif if my laptop wasntshuttin down in 5432 1
     
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  4. Juney Dark
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    Juney Dark Art Deco Killer Mango

    Apr 15, 2015
    I have a gif for every occasion :wayne:.. on a serious note though, gotta check that thing for viruses.
     
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  5. Slyk
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    Slyk God made a prophet.

    Apr 15, 2015
    you should make a song called 'carter 6' and then change it to another s--- title just before you release it
    :drake2:
     
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  6. FreeAgent
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    FreeAgent Resurrected like Jesus

    Apr 15, 2015
    Woke up to 2 new Narsh :nassalute:

    Haven't got the time right now but I'll check em out later :daps:
     
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  7. RetiredAccount
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    RetiredAccount Big Time Stuntin Like My Daddy

    Apr 15, 2015
    Narsh you have real potential to make it big. You get consistently better man. Keep it up.
     
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    CODEiNE DEMON One foot stuck in the tarpit of my ways

    Apr 15, 2015
    "Barter Bix gon be blassic" - E-hoods

    Otr tho I'm excited for the album

    And @Narsh I'll dwfinitely listen to this sometime today
     
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  9. Narsh
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    Apr 15, 2015
    I just need @Mike Tyson to put my face on one of the Carter covers :laff:
    Looking forward to hearing what you think m8!
    Thanks I'm that means a lot..I don't know what market there is for a chubby Indian spitting crazy rhymes but ILoveMakonnen is a thing so who knows??
    Same as FA, looking forward to hear what you think

    I usually don't have stuff this decent in the vault haha I was surprised
     
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  10. Peter Parker
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    Peter Parker your boy

    Apr 15, 2015
    This is good man, I like how you use your voice and the echo effect at some parts near the end is a nice touch. I haven't listtened to your EP yet but I have downloaded it :khaled2:
     
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  11. Narsh
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    Word man good looks! Let me know what you think :daps:
     
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  12. FreeAgent
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    Apr 15, 2015
    d---. Keep it up Narsh. You never disappoint.:nassalute:
     
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  13. Narsh
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    i know theres some new thug fam on this site...and i feel like they're more inclined to get off on the right foot with my music haha

    @MiamiDWade3 @Blorpy @RG Olympus @No English etc

    let me know what you think of this! I had more VERY obvious young thug rip offs that I took off my SC for now haha.

    but this is my most recent project so definitely check that when you can and let me know what you think slimeee

     
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  14. Big Mitch
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    Big Mitch You never made me ran once

    Apr 15, 2015
    I'll definitely listen to this when I'm off work. I've liked a lot of your stuff before. The rap battle was great.
     
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  15. Mild Bobby Sauce
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    Mild Bobby Sauce 3 apples tall

    Apr 15, 2015
    wuddup slime keep it up cuz this goes
     
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    pretty good actually? are you the one rapping or did you produce?

    we should collab

    I got some beats here soundcloud.com/mt_olympus
     
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  17. Narsh
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    im takin off like icarusssss
     
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  18. Narsh
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    Apr 15, 2015
    i do the poems

    horrible with the production/technical side of things. mixed this myself, and its probably the best ill ever get anything to sound haha

    good looks on reachin out though, ill follow you rn
     
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  19. Narsh
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    Apr 15, 2015
    preciate the love famo always feel free to hit me up with any feedback :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  20. Big Mitch
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    Big Mitch You never made me ran once

    Apr 15, 2015
    This was dope! Your flow was what stood out to me. You do a great job of not sounding monotone throughout songs/verses like a lot of other aspiring rappers try to do. (At least from what I've heard)
     
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