Jun 8, 2015 LINK - Credits - Castle for his Lyrics, the Cover, and Mixing Tadpole for his lyrics guy on youtube for beat Lyrics - Castle (IAmReal) - i think ive hit rock bottom ironically its awesome my rhymes are about to blossom, i finally have something to rap about I’m surrounded by empty bottles, but i think ive got a problem i always end up fallen, for the trashy models with no bottoms see these Hos won’t be loyal and im scared to be emotional as i approach this half naked chick quickly i start thinking on what to say so i begin to spew some bs about my debut album although i haven’t really started on any anthems this weird dude behind me interrupts me he goes by the name of tadpole first reaction, what the f--- kind of a stage name is that i know a lot of dough from this game can make you a little crayy but what the h--- is this guy on? he proclaims to be a rapper well if you ever want to grow you may want to rename yourself but never mind that what do you want with me? he says “i think i know a way we can get on our grind to the looks of it yea we are both unsigned maybe we could combine our skill sets and actually make something that drops before detox” well thanks for the offer but i aint living the hard knock life of course I’m lying i just want some sex tonight so i f----- the ugly whor- and the next mornin i knocked on his front door left everything behind and now on my way to a fine blessed life and i don’t even have to mention that this kid can spit lets hop into the next dimension and listen to the one and only tadpole Tadpole - 4th dimension raps So it's time to bust Let the time adjust Clocks chortlin chimes with rust Piles sand clumped by dust Particles carry through the air As the wooden door creeps shut Ingest as gust of muck and must Gettin inside my lungs The air is getting heavy Call it pulmonary lifting The room looks dreary And shifting into different shapes Until, the sun falls and it Looks like a different place Just the scent of a Moroccan breeze Moribund leaves fall apart from trees Settle into the ground, decompose Fuel the cycle of living, absolving ghosts Let's make a toast To the skeletons covered in cobwebs And all the spiders feasting on flesh But, yet I'm living - what is life? A process - I know what it is not It's not death - But death is a stage Or maybe a phase because a stage has lights But would that not make bright The phase that we call life Would that make us luminaries In a process that is so scary In this existential crisis we're bearing As this air is - just to heavy to breath It's seeping into my veins The filth insidiously entering my brain The clock feels no guilt It just runs like a train It knows not what it does It chugs through the rain On a steady track Long aside our abandoned shelter The time ticks - never falters Never alters - But if it did? Then how could I rely On an ever-shifting time To remind me How long am I alive Outro - Castle - left everything behind and now on my way to a fine blessed life left everything behind and now on my way to a fine blessed life and i don’t even have to mention that this kid can spit lets hop into the next dimension and listen to the one and only tadpole ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for giving us a listen! This is a new single off our new collab album! If youd like to hear more of MY (Castle) songs PM/ask me. Same as if you want to hear more of Tadpole tracks, or just more of our collab tracks! No release date set yet as album is still being completed! HONEST feedback is very appreciated! Were trying to make good music and we have chosen to share our music here since we always get honest feed and we respect your guy's opinions! Once again thanks for your time!
Jun 8, 2015 Not sure which one you are, but the first guy was very average. Just sounded like a poor poor man's Slim, ditch that type of delivery.
Jun 8, 2015 Thanks for feedback man! I am the first guy. Flow was actually inspired by Asher Roth so I can see why you saw the similarity to Eminem (especially since I listen to him a lot). Thanks for checking it out and hopefully we impress you more next time!
Jun 9, 2015 If you listen to the song please give us some feedback! Even if its harsh, we want to improve! And NEED to improve if you guys arent liking it!
Jun 9, 2015 you guys could both greatly benefit from better mixing.. also, a more confident delivery. you guys sound a little shy. good beat selection.
Jun 9, 2015 what. THE. f---!? Absolutely terrible. Terrible flow & delivery, terrible mic presence, terrible rhymes terrible etc. etc. Ya'll really need to focus and get better before you put out whatever f---in album you're thinkin about droppin. You sound scared as f--- on the mic and your flow is choppier than the waters in The Perfect Storm. LMFAO @ that struggle 'UGH!' at the end of Tadpoles bs verse. WTF is with the outro? The topic is practically nowhere to be seen in either of your lyrics. Your vocabulary is elementary. 85% of the time you aren't rhyming. This is absolutely trash.
Jun 9, 2015 What do you mean no topic? My whole verse describes an event of what "occured" it tells a story. My flow wasnt choppy at all and was very laid back/story telling - like? Not once in my verse do I just not rhyme? I beg you to point out a place where I dont rhyme? I'd appreciate it when you give someone feedback you actually give them feedback. you go into detail and back up your points. All you are doing is throwing random buzz words like "trash", "dont rhyme", "Choppy flow" and then you dont back it up and say where it is or how we could improve. Youre just shi--ing on us to s--- on us.
Jun 9, 2015 Thanks man! Ive been trying to get a better delivery! Will keep working! Thanks for the feedback and yeah Ik i mix in Garageband... and im not the best but if youve heard older s--- from me this looks godly mixing wise lol. So hopefully i keep improving on that too!
Jun 10, 2015 yeah, definitely don't work in GarageBand. there's really no "real" mixing options in there as far as I'm concerned. Logic is pretty easy to use and user friendly, check that out.
Jun 10, 2015 @BNF i swear to god you have good points but use some f---ing tact man. don't b such a d-ck
Jun 10, 2015 Ain't nobody usin f---in 'random buzzwords', shut the f--- up, lmfao. I've already had two cats agree with me so I'm not wrong. The f--- I need to go into detail for? It's plain as day to me and at least two other cats that this song is terrible. That you two emcees, are terrible. Terribly terrible. You think I go into random threads to s--- on people randomly? I go in hoping to find some random jewels to bootleg and listen to all the live long day (fat chance on this god forsaken forum). I'm shi--ing on you because you f---in s---, fool. If you can't see it with the breakdown previously given, then I'm terribly sorry. And I don't wanna listen to that garbage again so, no, I will not go into detail. If I was wrong, why the f--- are people agreeing with me? Maybe I could use some tact like @Cyreides but that's my own demon.
Jun 10, 2015 i don't take any offense to it. i know we as artists have a lot of room to grow. me, particularly, i need to smoothen out my flow. thanks for the honest feedback guys.
Jun 10, 2015 You didnt give any feedback other than we are terrible? lol Thats buzzwords. You never said why. If 2 others already said that we s----d in the first place then why add your opinion? Thank you to everyone who gave real feedback.
Jun 11, 2015 I did tell you why. And I quote: I didn't think I needed to break it down any further, Tadpole seems to under-f---ing-stand me and instead of denying or trying to blindly refute what was said he actually took the harsh criticism to heart and looks like he'll be at least ATTEMPTING to elevate. It isn't like I came in and said, 'ew, ya'll s---' and left it at that. I told you WHY I think you f---in s---. Poor delivery and flow. Poor vocabulary. Poor 'rhymes'. Lack of cohesiveness in regards to the two of you sticking to the topic of a 'fine blessed life'. Poor mic presence. Please, stop being a b---- and take the criticism like a man. Use it as fuel and become a better emcee instead of whining like I didn't actually tell you wtf I thought was trash. Hint: all of it was trash. f---ing idiot.
