Mar 1, 2015

ayy random rough cut ive had on my laptop since like december...dont really think its gonna get ever get finalzied doe and im bored on this bus back to beantown so i thought id upload it

thank yeezus that the boltbus wifi (and soundcloud classic uploader >>>) came thru in the end

@Skippy @LasiK @Jet (listned to more of ur tape, will get back to you on the whole thing in a day or two) @M.I.C. @Creation @Meero @Bot @Mikey1990 @asvdawg @Grimace @helpmefam @AnalOnFirstDate

Spoiler

Im dressed in gold and hilfiger/
C3PO, Im her meal ticket/
You can't see me with your vision/
Your knee itchin from the position/
You been in.../
Check the vibe of the setting/
I need aquafina Im sweating/
I aint rolling man Im speeding/
Going 0 to a hundred, even/
Bettlejuice, I'm leaning/
Meaning I be smashing through bricks and/
Snorting lines like listen:
"We'll be dead within a minute/
Or a year who knows the difference"
Check the vibe of the setting/
lets get it
Check the vibe of the setting
Man they let anyone in
Im mesmerized by the betting
Man the slept on the kid
You need aquafina you sweating/
She rock a session in Lenox/
And she dropped a bean, and she spanish/
Now she's rolling foreign like royces/
She 5 9 like royce is/
My height I enjoy it/
Mai tais in Boston/
The after party is noise/
We leave after the party/

Sipping lean out of sippy cups, little ones, thatre plastic/
Our love is imported/
We lost in the motions/
Coasting/

Dont speak her language but she heard the sound and she like it/
Candid/
Keep the herb around cause she love the pound like handshakes/
And she rolling it up when my hand ache/
From whipping hard all night/
They dont get aw its ight/
They'll see it by tonight

50 been checking in/
Even though my PO put in/
The clearances come christmas eve/
Clearing me of anything/
Isn't that so interesting/
They made me sweat so soak it in/
Im free while they let the trojan in/
Holding in army men armed again/
Ready for Helena helluva of a cost for a kiss

when she bends it back like beckham did
she handle balls professionally
no handle bars she a pro
My BM an X like a bike show
she might show her white belly, where i am jazzing
I growl low, like DMX when she wanted to get it

Dont sweat it, f--- the capos, pop a cap and let your eyes close
And sweat it
medicated elated sedated
center stage with a lady called haile
she offers a halo for helping
or her body for those who would take it
I balance the stakes and then raise it
marry her then we start raising
a family fairy tales famous
finally im glad you could make it
sweating my dreams in the matrix
hallucinating

I can't wait till the day I get airplay in my own city
I'm tired of spending $2.50 just to take the T cause a cab is too expensive
I'm depressive, manic, obsessive
Can't just take two tabs with my friends and be like "ooo the skyline's so pretty"
Anymore, I need more in store
An eye opening, lye smokin, high floating Minotaur
With the head of a bull but a body of a feeble whor-
Pressure seizing my seasoned core
Arrested momentum in a house of cards
That's house arrest till I'm upset no more

yoo this is so f---ing stupid
this is so f---ing foolish
im rolling like we were in to it
but we weren't just go through the motions
constantly upping the dosage
sweating ourselves of our fluids
i needa aquafina im rolling
she need aquafina, she's rolling, rollin

 

Mar 1, 2015

Nice track, good flow & love the beat.

 

Mar 1, 2015

plastic/imported

sounds like a samsung phone

 

Mar 1, 2015

Appreciate both comments

 

Mar 1, 2015

The flow is good. No biting of anybody & rides the beat well

 

Mar 1, 2015

Thanks man. My favorite part flow/melody wise is the "5-0 been checkin in, even thoooo my PO put in clearances come Christmas eve...clearin me of anything"

I know it's a bit hit or miss throughout but I think it really clicks there

 

Mar 1, 2015

you did always say if you had a computer you'd be clicking all day

 

Mar 1, 2015

very good. should finalize this. Those high notes you hit>>>>

 

Mar 1, 2015

your flow on this is really good. nice job bro. I like the voice change up too

 

Mar 2, 2015

Haven't gone through all 5 minutes but I like it.

Relatable lyrics tbh

 

Mar 4, 2015

This has become my favorite track of yours

 

Mar 4, 2015

innnnnnnn

 

Mar 4, 2015

aite lemme listen now

 

Mar 4, 2015

can't get with your voice :/ I'm like tryna think of an older track of yours where I liked your voice cUse I know there was a few..

also, because your lyrics are usually very good, you should start focusing on emphasizing when you hit punchlines and whatnot. even tho it's not monotone per se, if I wasn't looking at he lyrics, I wouldn't be able to notice all the clever s--- you be saying.

like the line where you say you're jizzing on her white stomach, that's almost like a highlight but sonically, it's like you were shy to say it or something.

I looked at thugger's lyrics for this one song that I can't remember and I notice he doesn't rhyme a lot..you lowkey do the same thing. you against using end rhymes or sumn? lol

 

Mar 4, 2015

looking through your soundcloud. really liking omega. still not 100% for that voice but it works really really well.

delivery is soo smooth throughout. reminds me of da art of storytellin pt2

 

Mar 4, 2015

im not confident in my voice enough to rap in that traditional manner ya know?

im gonna try tho real soon. Like a straight up, back to the basics type rap and focus on all the advice you been throwin' my way

and im also gonna get the day job on my phone today lol, things went really well at work so a lot of stress/time consuming s--- is off my plate now

 

Mar 4, 2015

i love that s--- too

i wish @LasiK came through and mixed that joint but i think i did aight with it myself

i feel like im droooooowing

 

Mar 4, 2015

we should work on that joint you tried to get me and i think skippy (?) on

 

Mar 4, 2015

fasho

 

Mar 4, 2015

o.O even if that is what @Jet said., the only mic I got is a playstation one, so Idk how that would work out. But I'm just gonna assume you're thinking of someone else lol