Feb 13, 2015 Thoughts? @Grimace @helpmefam @Meero @Jet @LasiK @M.I.C. @Mike Tyson @Radeem My hook/verse 2: Im so far my home but im in my own zone My buddy my money my honey my throne My salary higher than Imma be broo Whoa I think im outta space in my dome im outer space wit this hoe I’m ballin like spalding im shinin like chrome whoa I woke up a f--- up im f---ing alone I think I got lost in the toxins I took to the dome Im boxed in, obnoxious, but often a joke Im trappin Im laughin Im leanin like mamma im grown My mamma can’t stop me and neither can the PoPo oh oh The picture the frame broke Elixirs alive in the smoke Consider connecting with ghosts Ill sketch you a picture of hope The sketches I etched might’ve broke She shook up the pack of the dope She snorted a sack of my own Some organic peruvian blow Callin it coocoo cause coke aint a joke the coca like mountains of snow she oprah with gifts i aint kno im higher than i was before im flying to zion im zoned sighing im high on some soap thats the slippery soft that nylon that nope that not anymore i can’t have anymore my minds already soared im outta space in my dome
Feb 13, 2015 Thanks man my main problem is obvi delivery so I've been like simplifying my writing to try and work on that
Feb 13, 2015 Yeah dude liked the stuff on my SC and wanted to work. He's the first rapper as well -- I literally can never understand what he's saying but it's always dope to listen to haha
Feb 14, 2015 why is that guy biting young thug soooooo hard. it's almost uncomfortable lol like how comfortable you are with your vocals on the hook but idk if I like it on the hook. think I would've preferred it on the verse at most. like the lyrics on your verse but why'd you mix it like that? it's like I can't understand you unless that's what you were going for. your delivery is much better here than it was on the other joint. confidence is always key.
Feb 14, 2015 He handled the mixing, and the production. And idk hahaha dude's definitely as big of a Rich Homie/Young Thug fan as I am so I think it's hilarious. Plus he does seem to have a good ear for melodies, just can't understand a word he's saying. But yeah, he's the producer so I didn't do much beside hand him my vocals
Feb 14, 2015 quan is very "normal" to me whereas thug isn't but the thug influence is heavy, yeah what style are you more leaning towards keeping?
Feb 14, 2015 its hard to say man. i have when recording all this s---, and i feel like working with the right person would make all of it viable. my favorite part about rapping is just how much fun I was when doing it -- which im sure you understand we gotta work on a track together haha -- i promise ill rap normally
