nemesi (rough mix)

Started by Narsh, Mar 24, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Mar 24, 2015

    nemesis

    Common sense is my nemesis
    Degenerates with sedatives
    Sellin em to little kids
    I stay I celibate I ont f--- with that
    I aint sell a bit since a dub sack
    I fell into it when luck passed me by like a hubcap
    Im rollin like a hubcap
    Im ballin like spalding
    Her p---- balding like old age
    Sorry Im gross babe
    Hurry on home there’s food in the oven
    I put a bun in her oven
    let her stomache rumble for nothing
    she aborted discussions fore I had chance to rebut it
    Im a cancerous vermin
    my worst nemesis is certain
    to be me cause im swerving
    lean is just a burden so i smoke weed incessantly
    See there’s a difference between me you and trinities
    no love lost really
    just some scenery
    your a--- like thievery
    leading me to luxury
    loyalty or f---ing sprees
    question it or love the s---
    i got nemesises nemesi
    say hello then say goodbye
    im flying high as mighty boy
    sighin i let out a cry
    smilin at that other line
    snorting on that other kind
    i am on some sherm tonight
    drank a worm i think im seeing lights
    colors that are super bright
    they dont exist but neither do i
    so suicide aint do or die it opens doors lets all try
    our nemesis is suit & tie (humankind)
    take one to the dome tonight
    she s----d me off and then i cried
    must be love if she’s inside
    sucks because i hate this life
    im sure she’ll die tonight if i
    ask her on one knee and i
    aint a pastor just a human guy
    why do i need to survive
    why can’t i just exit left
    the traction that’s embedded yes
    a fraction of whats comin next
    im laughing drinking leanin pressed
    my d-ck against her naked chest
    her t-ts were bouncing like a net
    that tramp’ll lean if i feed her x
    she’ll be an ex cuz she’s up next
    and then shes next she thinks she's next and then shes vexed
    im lost in my dreams my neck is spinnin 360 next
    the exorcist im exiting just leave me to my next of kin
    my temperament is tentative i tend to always tense a bit
    im tossing sedatives into the mix so selfishly i relapse so quick
    she sells to me she snorts with me
    she steals from me she leans on me
    she the homie but she a ho i think
    she be lowkey with her things
    i love the pink so i stomach it
    im my own nemesis

    @Jet @LasiK @M.I.C. @Creation @DCG @Grimace @helpmefam @csw621 @Skippy @asvdawg @Meero @Radeem etc

    kinda low quality at times but was fun to mix...this wasnt supposed to be final by any means, but the guy that was supposed to finish it never did and i had this on private until now.

    id like to thank my mentor danny brown for ghost writing this track. im all about giving the credit where to everyone involved, like kanye
     
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  2. Fire Squad
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    Mar 24, 2015
    First time listener to your music but this was interesting it reminded me of Gambino actually
    ironically I'm about to listen to --- for the first time :dead:
     
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  3. Narsh
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    haha the writing was a lot weirder than ive ever done before for sure, and weirdly sexual at that (thats why i went with danny brown)

    (btw @Bot if you're reading this, try to keep it together -- you were fallin apart in the podcast thread m8)
     
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    Fire Squad Boss Don Biggavel

    Mar 24, 2015
    Yeah I was like "oh s--- he went there" hearing those lines lol, shame about the mix it was a bit distracting as the song went on.
     
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  5. aquaberryares
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    aquaberryares one time I made sex

    Mar 24, 2015
    impressed tbh. I'm sure you've heard this before since it's an easy comparison considering your avi but the thugger influence is on a kendrick to logic level.
    interesting writing tho, definitely see potential.
     
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  6. Narsh
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    im getting "gambino" and "thugger"

    n----s mad confused b :laff:

    haha i appreciate the feedback guys @JCinator @asvdawg @Fire Squad
     
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    aquaberryares one time I made sex

    Mar 24, 2015
    I was referring to the voice mainly. I don't listen to Gambino, so idk there might be a resemblance there.
     
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  8. asvdawg
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    Mar 24, 2015
    Ya i definitely hear the gambino in this too. Good job m8.
     
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    Mar 24, 2015
    like it a lot
     
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  10. Old Account
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    Mar 25, 2015
    Great @Narsh, mention me when the final version comes about
     
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  11. Narsh
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    Mar 25, 2015
    thatll probably be never lol
     
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